Silly Senryu

Silly Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

I lift heavy weights 
and I can't write diddly s**t
cause my muse is jacked 

© 2015 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
This is actually pretty accurate right now. God help me

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stupid muse. what good is she? great silly Senryu tho.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Clever, and so relatable (except for the lifting-weights part--I don't do that).

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

thanks whitewillow
Quick and witty. This structure is my favorite and I enjoyed this combination of words. We've all got days where we don't know what to write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

thank you..........
Kasey Miriam

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
Been here..
Read it
and see Ya got past it.
Congratulations
no reply needed :-)
Just keep the cadence


Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

thanks kate
You are who you are my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

That's what I'm saying
I don't care who knows it sugar it's always been you! Your muse will return in time, bravo.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

thank you thomas
At least you have lifted weights, I haven't lifted so much as a pencil. I wonder what messes with my muse? Ha, writer's block is a frustrating thing. WEll done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thanks Tai
I don't lift anything heavier than a textbook... what's my Muse's excuse? ;) Clever one, Mark!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thank you Rita
You need to high jack another muse. I need to push weights. I'm getting old. I hope you found your muse. Nice use of words my friend.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Great short piece, hopefully it sparks something even greater. Finally over a months-long bout of writers block myself, so I feel you. I hope to be reading more soon

Posted 9 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

9 Years Ago

Will!! Good to see you bro

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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