Advice for the Chronic Lovelorn

It could be you

There's always gonna be a******s 

Who wanna break your heart 

You gotta learn to weed them out 

before they even start

There's always going to be evil

cum sucking succubus 

Don't let her get you p***y whipped 

Male Sovereignty's a must

So that girl won't give you any

That guy's a giant prick 

Genitals are bargaining chips 

Either p***y or dick 

Relationships are compromise 

and putting up with s**t 

Sure there's love and all that crap 

But that's just part of it 

You gotta know just where you stand

You gotta draw the line 

Cause if you have no boundaries 

They'll cross them every time 

They're gonna walk all over you 

and use you like a tool 

And you know it's all your fault 

Cause you're a spineless fool 

Yes I know I'm crass as f**k 

It's kinda what I do 

A poem by Baby Ricochet

That should have been a clue 

Author's Note

You want to know two things that make or break a relationship? I'm not talking the "She's so fine I'll make her mine" part I'm talking standing at the CVS checkout one o'clock in the morning with Tampons and Midol part. The two things that will make or break a relationship is compromise and boundaries. As soon as you move in with an intimate partner, that's it. You're going to be doing things you don't want to do, going places you don't want to go, watching entertainment you don't want to see and hanging out with people you don't particularly like and you're going to have to like it, at least half of the time because that's sharing a life together and that's why you're involved in an intimate relationship. The other one, boundaries, is where there's no compromise. Both people need to be very clear as to what these are and retain a large part of their individuality because if they don't everyone's going to be miserable in no time. It's just a fact of life kids.

Reviews

[ANTO]

There's always gonna be a******s
Who wanna break your heart
You gotta learn to weed them out
before they even start

In the midst of a rant (kids) ...the above stanza is probably the best advice in Life you'll ever read. Well done again BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you anto

[Rita L. Sev]

Cause if you have no boundaries
They'll cross them every time

Wiser words have yet to be penned... Great advice, and that last stanza made me laugh out loud!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Rita. It's good to hear from you

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem keep up the good work

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank for stopping by

[jennifer little]

your welcome

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol you are one silly dude. I like the completely real nature, in which you laid it all on the table. Always great to read your stuff.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Briana

[Carolann Dowsett]

Dare I say I've missed you and your blunt, straight to the point poetry. Nice work, just what I needed. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Carolann. It's good to hear from you.

[Troy Henson]

I do love thye honesty and truth that spills to a page when you write...to this one I certainly can relate.

Troy

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Troy

[Tai Ryens]

Your works always do give the truest advice and this one is no exception. Well done, as always.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tai

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

My motto is if they break your heart you break their spirit fire with fire darling well done good read

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas

[Marie]

And they should certainly be willing to share poetry by Baby Richochet.

[Baby Ricochet]

I think so

[R Smith]

its quite simply the truth, i am living it so i believe every word you wrote, thank you, now i'm really depressed :P

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks for stopping by