SCOTLAND

Secession in a civilized nation

Old Scotland wanted to secede

The people cast their vote

The no votes held the ballot box

Scot independence smote

The losers bowed out gracefully

The winners didn't gloat

Old Nessy kept the Union jack 

The nation held the vote 

Not a single shot was fired 

No voting with the gun

The Scots achieved a victory

They showed us how it's done 

Author's Note

Scotland pulled off an incredible feat this week. They pushed independence all the way to a popular vote and no one got killed, no troops called out, no one blew up a voting booth, no calls for an armed rebellion, nothing. The Scots taught the world how a civilized people attempt succession. They turn out in massive numbers to vote and accept the outcome. So here's to the Scots. HIP HIP HOORAY!!! HIP HOP HOORAY!!! HIP HIP HOORAY!!!

Reviews

[Roland Petrov]

Nicely said! Did you take the photo yourself, by any chance? The combo of poem and photo, along with your smart observation, made for an enjoyable read. Now how will it play out in Catalonia?

[Phantom Heart]

I am so proud of my heritage! :) I also think your poem was good. :) Cheers baby!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Morgan

[Moonie]

Okay, now that's what I call a contemporary poem-passionate, to-the-point, and fun. My favourite lines would be
It was certainly tough to pick one, but I think "Scot independence smote" steals the show.

HIP HIP HURRAY!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Many thanks...............

[writing mojo]

and William Wallace rolls over in his grave as Mel Gibson yells scene..interesting where evolution has taken us...it's good

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I'm saying

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Baby... love your name... Your poem is a delight and
I have kept up with the News in this regard. Your poem
is heart warming and a good example of how people could
live together in Peace and understanding and respect.
truly... Pat

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks for stopping by

[Ama May Cooper]

Short. sweet and simple . Lovely and straight to the point. I compeltely agree with your sentiment aswell it is a shame that other disagreements cannot be settled with the need of warfair if only other nations could take this little voting thing on board and not find the need to bomb the s**t out of each other.

I love your final paragraph, who am i kidding i love them all but something leaps out at me from it and it embeds the message with leaving a meaningful and thought provoking after taste

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ama May

[Will]

Considering all that has happened in Ireland, Scotland's feat is damn near miraculous. I like this poetic tribute to an amazing thing.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I'm saying

[Valentine]

After viewing "Monarch of the Glen" I love Scotland, it is beautiful.. Valentine

[Baby Ricochet]

I know I'd love to go

[icelandicblue]

It was awesome. Good for them. Have you seen this video it's a hoot:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5SvdecwnYJ4

You've got to get used to the accent. She's just a regular person who did this anti UK video. I loved it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Blue. It's good to see you back

[Michael G.]

Good write on a current event. Well done.

They did it better than we did. We had to go to war to become independent. Perhaps this could become a new trend that history should learn to repeat.

[Baby Ricochet]

That would be good. Thanks Mr G