For Julie
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
A friend
The wolf's at the door
I'll never see you again
No doubt for the best
Oh crazy girl I'll miss you
Like the Oceans and the plains
© 2014 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
She was trouble. Don't ask.
Reviews
Addictions are hard to kick BR - especially peopley ones.
Great confession piece mate.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short, concise and strictly on point. There's nothing wrong with that, or saying fare-thee-well to one who causes you nothing but trouble.
Good for you, Baby Ricochet. Good for you...
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short, concise and strictly on point. There's nothing wrong with that, or saying fare-thee-well to one who causes you nothing but trouble.
Good for you, Baby Ricochet. Good for you...
10 Years Ago
Thank you PloughBoy
10 Years Ago
The pleasure was all mine, BR. You're very welcome.:)
Short & sweet, to the point, not enough of it these days :-)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short & sweet, to the point, not enough of it these days :-)
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by
Just look around you, BR, and I'm sure you'll find someone who will make you much happier. You are a sensitive, caring person, good looking and a darn good poet to boot. Just sharpen your pencil and write that girl at the next Nautilus station a love poem - voila! True love is out there and you will find it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Just look around you, BR, and I'm sure you'll find someone who will make you much happier. You are a sensitive, caring person, good looking and a darn good poet to boot. Just sharpen your pencil and write that girl at the next Nautilus station a love poem - voila! True love is out there and you will find it.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by Joyce. It's good to hear from you
Ok, no asking - but the poem sparks so many questions. To miss trouble that much....
Posted 10 Years Ago
Ok, no asking - but the poem sparks so many questions. To miss trouble that much....
10 Years Ago
That's for sure
Ok I wont ask. Nicely done.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Ok I wont ask. Nicely done.
good poem- nice to see you've gotten over Julia. Every single person in the world goes through bad things, but only a select few people are willing to get over them.
Posted 10 Years Ago
good poem- nice to see you've gotten over Julia. Every single person in the world goes through bad things, but only a select few people are willing to get over them.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by
Speaking a lot in brevity. Well written
Posted 10 Years Ago
Speaking a lot in brevity. Well written
10 Years Ago
Thank you Zahra
that was a very long story summed in few lines, showing nice feelings, well done
Posted 10 Years Ago
that was a very long story summed in few lines, showing nice feelings, well done
10 Years Ago
Thank you Stars are far
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Added on August 7, 2014
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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