two minute Tanka

Cause that's how much time I spent making it up

The last man on earth 

Will be killed in a shootout 

With a giant roach 

Over twenty bucks of crack 

cause addiction and roaches

Will be the last things to go 

Author's Note

Goddamn roaches. Always hoarding the crack.

Reviews

[Mark]

Crack addicted roaches from hell. You should write a movie script.

[Baby Ricochet]

good idea. Thanks Mark

[Ruth]

You have a way with the shorter pieces, leaves me wondering/wandering :) x

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks you ruth

[Tai Ryens]

How about a roach with an addiction?

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks tai

[Coyote Poetry]

Those roaches won't die. Just waiting for us to screw-up the planet and the human race to be gone. There was a movie once where the roaches control the earth and man was the slave. Thank you for the interesting poetry.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you coyote

[Vidya Bacchus]

I believe you are right. Short and to the point .

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they probably will be...this was really tasty...like a two-minute eggs.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks jacob

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Lol if only roaches knew how to share. Lmao beyond clever, bro.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you poet

[Pryde Foltz]

Some very clever word-play, Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you pryde

[Debbie_Philly]

LOL this is great... love the light hearted tone in this piece.. great job !! 1

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Debbie

[icelandicblue]

LOL- wish I could say I didn't get it but I most certainly do. You have a way with words BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Blue. So do you