You said I was Objectifying

Just a quickie

You said I was objectifying 

But you're in skinny jeans 

Your perfect little pear shaped a*s 

Keeps whispering to me 

Halter top stretched oh so tightly 

Over those comely breasts 

Playful midriff peeking at me 

I'm dreaming of incest

I don't even have a sister

I'll just pretend it's you 

You said I was objectifying 

but look at what you do 

You tease a satyr with that walk 

You drive the beast insane 

Has it ever occurred to you

You're helping the refrain 

You said I was objectifying 

Well I suppose that's true 

With chicks like you prancing around 

What am I gonna do 

Reviews

[Inda]

Yep, another witty piece Ricochet, funny stuff.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you inda

[Anita Singh]

Poor men! How can they ever resist? And Ah! women playing a tease as always.. Good work!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you annabella

[#SecretWriter]

I think you make a great but daring point. Its a compliment to be objectified if you dress for it. Funny and well penned :)

[Baby Ricochet]

It depends if she's attracted to the guy and If he doesn't say something stupid.

[Daniel Sala]

Quite true, and funnily put.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Daniel

[Author Unknown]

This is very funny and mature. You are very good with rhymes...I think Limerick suits you well too.
And I strongly agree with you. Sometimes women are dress inappropriately though sometimes they are not aware of this. Some do it intentionally. They might sending the wrong message. " Grab Me " Please don't get me wrong. Women's curves are one of their greatest assets. And some know how to play this well for their own personal agenda, vendetta and advantage.

If you're open for suggestion There's a room for improvement on your piece on the First Stanza
Fourth line " Keeps whispering to me " Instead try " Keeps whispering in my brain "
Its softens the landing and the last word is not stress ( syllable ) too much. It rhymes a little bit with jeans. Well written piece ~ Author Unknown

[Baby Ricochet]

Good idea. Thank you

[AYVID N]

So true Baby! What can a man do?
Thanks for a great read. I liked it a lot.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Divya

[R. L. Hill]

So true. I'm a woman and I am so damn tired of idiots in my gender blabbing on about being objectified. I think you hit this snib of drama right on the head.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Quirklet

[s y e]

HA! Oh lordie, Baby this made me laugh so much! LOL

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Noodle. Glad to give you a giggle

[MsJewel]

....sounds like a tease to me BR!

:) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I'm saying

[Mark]

The Great and Mysterious Contradiction. Women dress so we'll look at them then get pissed when we do. ROFL

[Baby Ricochet]

For sure. Thank you Mark.