Perfect day: A senryu

Perfect day: A senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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One of the things I love about My side of Florida

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The fish are biting 
Got some shiners for snook bait 
Beer in the cooler 

© 2014 Baby Ricochet


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Sounds like a very chilled day

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

They usually are
and trust my darling, we will bite!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you Thomas
Sounds like a perfect day to me! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Gleb
Reminded me of my dad! Miss those days of just fishing till the Sun went down. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you poetic heroics
That does sound perfect... butwhat in the world are snook?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

It's a fish that can give you and your tackle a real run for your money if you hook one over ten pou.. read more
Beer in the cooler. Sigh. I wish I was sitting on the dock with a cold one....and a line in the water.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

That's for sure.
This evoked a peaceful and relaxing mood.

All wonderful things in life don't need to be spectacular and wild. I believe that the little things we experience everyday can be easier to cherish than the rare, spectacular ones; they're much more common in our lives.

Great work! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cascara
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

10 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Fishing is a great hobby to partake in! I would most certainly indulge in it more had the general vicinity around my living area weren't so crippled by pollution . . .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Well that sucks. I live on the west coast of Florida about 2 miles from the beach. The fishing aroun.. read more
I would like to sit there,
too, have that beer with ya from that cooler
as true friends fish, on a weekly day.
Snooks are awesome, if you got a biggy :D

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Snook are a blast to catch. I've hooked a few whoppers myself.
Have a good one, my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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