Orders. A senryu

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I heard the order 

Light the m**********r up

So that's what I did 

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Well a mans gotta do what a mans gotta do. Nice :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Carolann

[s y e]

Putting the imagination to the test here.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks noodle

[Mark]

Heh nice one. Could be about a lot of things. Hoping it's about a joint.

[Baby Ricochet]

Not quite. Thanks Mark

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Must have been one of the most adrenaline-pumping, sweating yet thrilling and frightening moments...to kill a human being, ordered so by someone else. Greatly penned!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Gleb

[Troy Henson]

The role you play has a pivotal mark on the decisions you make. Well said with such power and grace.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Troy

[Marie]

Sometimes obeying is what you do. It just is.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes it is .........

[Jack...]

Did you at least roll it first? You tell'em BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

No I just shot the son of a b***h

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You say it like it is...There is power in orders.Bravo

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Sami Khalil]

are welcome...:).................

[Draven]

Fantastic write. It leaves one wondering what all emotions were involved.

[Baby Ricochet]

A whole lot of adrenaline

[Tai Ryens]

Like they always say, orders are orders . . .

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes they are. Thanks Tai