The Crow On The Pole Haiku

The Crow On The Pole Haiku

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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More phone fun

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The crow on the pole
Cawed at me as if to mock
So I shot his a*s

© 2014 Baby Ricochet


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You did good Baby. And in the process we got a good laugh :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thanks Divya
Ha, ha, ha. Good poem! Fun to read, unexpected ending.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Daniel
I can't help but smile at this short poem that is somehow full of meaning in the most interesting of ways.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Casanova3
Crows are often associated with superstitions that involve death, and to shoot it means to shoot death . . . the irony!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Lol! Thanks tai
Bang! Delightfully cruel and vulgar with a hint of class barely exposed. Funny as hell. Perfect score in my book!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Xavier. i appreciate it
hahahahaha....looks like you have so much fun on phone, its shows clearly on this write.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you cassie
Love it!! Another example of Ricochet at his best!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you inda
A very non-traditional haiku, BR, but what the heck? Crows are part of nature and you are, too, so if you want to shoot one and write about it, might as well do it in very short form poem. Once he's dead, it's over and done with and why prolong the agony? lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you joyce
Served him right. THough I don't know why he needed an a*s. Crows fly; they don't ride on donkeys.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you Marie
Crows are hard to kill. At least after the first one. They are pretty smart.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

A twelve gauge will do the job
Mark

10 Years Ago

LOL true if you're close enough. I used to target practice at the dump with a .22 as a kid. Only eve.. read more

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