Some day senryu

One day

There may come a day
I can wash the blood away
But I don't know when

Reviews

[R. L. Hill]

Blood, eh? I love how that can be taken both literally and figuratively.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you quirklet

[Tai Ryens]

Blood as a metaphor for experiences..? Nonetheless, a fitting portrayal for memories that haunt . . . Well done

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tai

[N!LoC]

that day should come.... it should....

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you N! LoC.

[Ruth]

Powerful for a concise piece...this says so many things, so many things experienced and seen and the burden those things have placed upon the mind and very skin...painful actually...clever too x

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Ruth

[Ruth]

My pleasure....Happy New Year hon :) x

[Mark]

Experts say it takes six weeks to alter our beliefs. Takes a lot of work and a sense that we must change I think. My good thoughts are with you.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mark

[MsJewel]

So much pain and emotion in so few words. I hope that day comes soon for you.
:) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you jewel

[Frieda P]

I do hope someday soon Baby, this one is a killer, so few words that pack a powerful punch.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Frieda

[Marie]

Good Senry Baby R. A lot of meanng in this one...

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you marie

[Daniel Sala]

Great exercise in Senryus, and a very deep, painful reflection, shocking to some I suspect, a powerful poem, spot on with the syllable count. Great piece.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Daniel

[Vidya Bacchus]

Simple and to the point my friend.The day will come for you I believe this:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)