Why do we do it
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
Another quickie
Chicks are always cold Chicks are always hot Chicks are always bitching about crap they haven't got Chicks can drive you crazy Fill your life with pain She may be a beauty but she could be insane Guys are no better All we do is lie We just gotta get some For p***y we connive We will do anything to toss her taco pie If there stands a reason We're horny is what's why It's a bloody wonder We connect at all and no one ever reads the writing on the wall
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
I made it up driving back from Tampa so blame I 275's rush hour traffic
Reviews
Its like a new style of parable BR - class!! The thread of thought is unbroken throughout - we're all as bad as each other.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Its a painful truth that we all ignore. However, its a fun truth to explore.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Its a painful truth that we all ignore. However, its a fun truth to explore.
10 Years Ago
That's for sure
my boyfriend and I are probably the only couple that realizes, what ur saying in this poem, lol. we are always calling each other b***h or b*****d or something like that. and we never get offended by each other. because we know its true. but I like this, its funny and true, lol
Posted 10 Years Ago
my boyfriend and I are probably the only couple that realizes, what ur saying in this poem, lol. we are always calling each other bitch or bastard or something like that. and we never get offended by each other. because we know its true. but I like this, its funny and true, lol
10 Years Ago
thank you ginger
Your pen spits out fearless confessions. Very enjoyable. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Your pen spits out fearless confessions. Very enjoyable. :)
11 Years Ago
thank you blue
Chicks can drive you crazy
Fill your life with pain
She may be a beauty
but she could be insane
.... it's a gift
Posted 11 Years Ago
Chicks can drive you crazy
Fill your life with pain
She may be a beauty
but she could be insane
.... it's a gift
11 Years Ago
That's for sure
The fact that you can use "p***y" and "connive" in the same line and make it work is goddamn brilliant, my friend. A solid piece, waxing on the interactions between genders. I like the short choppy lines, it makes the piece what it is. Nicely done
Posted 11 Years Ago
The fact that you can use "pussy" and "connive" in the same line and make it work is goddamn brilliant, my friend. A solid piece, waxing on the interactions between genders. I like the short choppy lines, it makes the piece what it is. Nicely done
11 Years Ago
Thank you will. It's good to see you back.
11 Years Ago
Good to be back, Mark
I suppose the overall theme is that people are unreliable as a whole? Of which I fully agree to, to an extent.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I suppose the overall theme is that people are unreliable as a whole? Of which I fully agree to, to an extent.
11 Years Ago
for sure. Thanks Tai
I see you have your priorities straight, even in rush hour traffic...
Posted 11 Years Ago
I see you have your priorities straight, even in rush hour traffic...
11 Years Ago
Poetry over accidents. That's right
Awesome quickie poem about chicks!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Awesome quickie poem about chicks!
11 Years Ago
thank you sir
That's the way of the world bro
Posted 11 Years Ago
That's the way of the world bro
11 Years Ago
Yes it is. Thank you Pete
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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