Why do we do it

Why do we do it

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Another quickie

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Chicks are always cold
Chicks are always hot
Chicks are always bitching
about crap they haven't got

Chicks can drive you crazy
Fill your life with pain
She may be a beauty
but she could be insane

Guys are no better
All we do is lie
We just gotta get some
For p***y we connive

We will do anything
to toss her taco pie
If there stands a reason
We're horny is what's why

It's a bloody wonder
We connect at all
and no one ever reads
the writing on the wall

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
I made it up driving back from Tampa so blame I 275's rush hour traffic

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Its like a new style of parable BR - class!! The thread of thought is unbroken throughout - we're all as bad as each other.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thanks anto
Its a painful truth that we all ignore. However, its a fun truth to explore.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

That's for sure
my boyfriend and I are probably the only couple that realizes, what ur saying in this poem, lol. we are always calling each other b***h or b*****d or something like that. and we never get offended by each other. because we know its true. but I like this, its funny and true, lol

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you ginger
Your pen spits out fearless confessions. Very enjoyable. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you blue
Chicks can drive you crazy
Fill your life with pain
She may be a beauty
but she could be insane

.... it's a gift

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
The fact that you can use "p***y" and "connive" in the same line and make it work is goddamn brilliant, my friend. A solid piece, waxing on the interactions between genders. I like the short choppy lines, it makes the piece what it is. Nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you will. It's good to see you back.
Will

11 Years Ago

Good to be back, Mark
I suppose the overall theme is that people are unreliable as a whole? Of which I fully agree to, to an extent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

for sure. Thanks Tai
I see you have your priorities straight, even in rush hour traffic...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Poetry over accidents. That's right
Awesome quickie poem about chicks!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you sir
That's the way of the world bro

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Yes it is. Thank you Pete

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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