No time

No time

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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We're all there or soon will be

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Haven't got the time
To lose what's left of my mind
Gotta go to work
for the bill collector lurks
With the debts I left behind

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
Another phone quickie. Despite the fact there's a computer right in front of me

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We are slave to the debtors like they say. A short but very good write...I like how your messages are direct and witty to get the message across. I use that approach too...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you sami
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
That's the up side of working like a dog... no time to go loco! Keep that phone handy, Mark!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you rita
The author's note is better than the poem xD And the poem is priceless. I have a smartphone now *YIKES* and I can't wait to see how stupid I can get on it ;-) Thanks for the laugh...xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmer. Xx
Indebtedness is a life long problem. And it may get worse after you die...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Maybe. Thank you marie
Prophetic and so very true - hold on tight for the new credit merry-go-round mate
Good writing BR


Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you anto
Yep! Short and to the point. This hits home as I may not be working after tomorrow :)
Toss of the coin - lol... It's all good though either way

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I got buddies sweating the same thing.
Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

I understand. I can weather the storm, but I am concerned for my younger writers and illustrators th.. read more
A good quickie, BR. One that I can intimately relate to. My one week vacation is almost over now and I'm still tired out. If only those darn bill collectors would take extended vacations - say a couple of years!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Joyce.
I sold my mind to pay bills...didn't get much, so I took the money I got and bought a lottery ticket and lost, they're still calling daily. How true this is my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you jack
Damn taxes! or mafia deals, but taxes!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Sometimes I think they're the same thing.
Addicted to the phone writes? heh, you excel at them at least. They are always good reads.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you mark

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Added on September 26, 2013
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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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