No time

No time

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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We're all there or soon will be

"
Haven't got the time
To lose what's left of my mind
Gotta go to work
for the bill collector lurks
With the debts I left behind

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
Another phone quickie. Despite the fact there's a computer right in front of me

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I do have time ;)
Thank for such a small and very expressive poem.

love it!
Singh :)
- Cheers!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks singh. It's good to hear from you
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

Same here :)
Better out than in I say !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you tom
does anyone have time? nice work BR

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you art
The slogan for America should be debt, debt, debt, and more debt. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you raya
It was quick but very truthful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Eddie
Nice,
swift and to the point. We all have a debt, do we pay it is the final question, could easily be taken metaphoric. Well played.
Chris
95/100 - I know you can do much better.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you soul
Man, ain't it the truth, Baby... Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure. Thank you Angi
giggle giggle giggle......

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Good to see you N!LoC
Another smile provocking piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you inda
The bill collector is always round the corner They smile when they sell it to you and grimace when they take back their pound of flaesh

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure. Thanks for stopping by Tate.

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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