Fix me a Bagel tanka

Screwing around with my phone again

Fix me a bagel
Just as soon as you're able
Cream cheese a s**t load
and the butter a dick load
Just like a fat man's fable

Author's Note

What do ya want, I spent like 10 minutes on it. It took longer than that to send the rr's.

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You've piled it on in this one. It's good you are strong so you can pick the gd thing up! A very fun read.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Blue

[Keith]

Poetry should be fun. This was a blast, keep em coming BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keith

[Commanda Panda]

I always enjoy your easy reads. Simple, fun and every once in a while deep. Variety is the spice of life, and works like these can reach readers of all levels.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you cp

[Tai Ryens]

Clever and humorous, i liked it.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tai

[Dye]

A s**t load of cream cheese and a dick load of butter, both unmeasurable amounts in my opinion. This can't be good for your work out routine. LOL

[Baby Ricochet]

Only on cheat day. Thank you Dye

[Will]

This is how my grandma likes her bagels, but with all butter. Really made me laugh, Mark. Well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you will.

[Luke L]

hahaha oh my god. I love reading your stuff man, you have an awesome sense of humour! Dirty and ridiculous that is the s**t I like the most.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you luke.

[Luke L]

you are welcome, sir :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A s**t load of cream cheese may be too much... but can I get mine toasted? :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Of course.....

[Frieda P]

Now I know you're not eating this s**t BR....you must be bored.

[Baby Ricochet]

Only on cheat day. Thank you frieda

[Tom]

Is there any better way ? (I'm hungry)!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you tom