Sarin Dripping Skies

A nursery rhyme

         Sarin dripping skies
    Phosphoric clouds float by
   Choking lungs bleeding gums
     and blinding burning eyes
 Death sings her tortured melodies
       of genocidal tragedies
 one last breath of sudden death
     and all the children die 

Author's Note

Sarin is a chemical agent
Phosphorus is highly flammable

Reviews

[reeyce smythe wilder]

The sing song melody to these words...it's so disturbing it boarders on brilliant.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you reeyce

[Mark]

I can't imagine what it would be like to have your homeland government treat you this way. Sickening.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thank you mark.

[ANTO]

I read this in that swinging kind of nursery ryhme style and it sent shudders through me BR. Its a well written tale of man's inhumanity to man once again. It also reeks (not your poem) of false flag. :(

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ANTO

[Rita L. Sev]

Like rocking the baby out of the tree, this is a disturbing, vivid, well rhymed piece that reflects the power we wield over those weaker than ourselves.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[TL Boehm]

So sad. And chemical agents are rearing up in Syria. Unbelievable we are so casual with our offspring.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Now we're going to launch cruise missiles at them.

[TL Boehm]

that's a hard call. I totally believe we should blow the perps away but cruise missiles don't know the difference between an idiot and an innocent. Why can't we just have someone go in there and pick the key players off?

[Jack...]

And BR is highly talented. Nice (nursery) rhyme my friend.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Jack

[Brian Angeles]

Wow I see the image you put in this poem. Sad yet true, gook work

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Brian

[.]

The origin of most fairy tales and nursery rhyme are extremely dark and soo is the world this day and age. Great reflection .

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Cord

[Marie]

Mother Goose would probably not have liked this...

[Baby Ricochet]

Probably not. Thank you Marie

[Frieda P]

Killer nursery rhyme Baby, but aren't they all disturbing, very affecting Mark....

[Baby Ricochet]

Some of them are. Thank you Frieda