Vengeful God

Demon souls they clawed
at the martyrs for jihad
Games of give and take
The catastrophes we make
 Under a vengeful God

Reviews

[Marie]

Peope take vengence in God's name. God doesn't care.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure

[Inda]

Yep, great one here!!!!!!!!!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Inda

[Keith]

Frightening reality, picture and poem provide a lot to worry about.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes it does. Thank you Keith

[ANTO]

You offer quite a feast for the mind here BR. Thats one scary accompanying image too..
Good one!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ANTO

[Dye]

Vengeful god indeed. It's too bad. You've summed it up for sure.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Dye

[Tate Morgan]

Religion is credited as the catalyst that condoned more killing than everything else except the mosquito. While the mosquito has been credited with the death of one third of the human race that ever lived and died.

[Baby Ricochet]

Man that's some f'ed up statistics

[Tate Morgan]

yeah sad but true.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

well I thought this was quite the thriller... But life is a thriller at times...
Your eyes are blood red. And mine are blue... I have no clue but with this I have an idea
Thank you for the write.... Tis love is all

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Aristede

[icelandicblue]

Children under a vengeful god can only learn one lesson and the world suffers this sad legacy. The picture is as powerful as your words.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Blue

[Joyce S. Greene]

You must have seen a lot of this in Iraq, Mark. I am sorry we lost so many in a cause that may never be truly resolved. Very powerful poetry, the souls of those children are indeed sacrificed to their vengeful Gods.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Joyce

[Rita L. Sev]

Powerful thoughts in these few lines, Mark. Excellent.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita