Dream Girl Tanka

I know they're not suppose to rhyme. I'm a visionary

       Dream without a care
       Of a lass of virtue fair
        With all of that said
    I'll take a stripper instead
So long as she's bare down there

Author's Note

I know. I'm an objectifying neanderthal. But I own it.

Reviews

[Will]

For a second i thought Ricochet was going soft on us... Then we come to the bare naked lady! Nice work, my friend. Visionary at times, yes, and I like the rhymes. Screw convention. Write on.

[Shivam Murari]

Totally agree with you Will! :P

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Will

[Nia Hope]

Ripple like what they like and I like how you expressed what you like :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Ankara

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It started out with a chivalrous tone... and then came the stripper.... LOL

Hey, at least you own up to it. ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Robie

[Cody Williams]

Nice an simple! I like it! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Cody

[Cody Williams]

No problem at all! I enjoyed it!

[Pryde Foltz]

Own it you do. I love your irreverence.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Pryde

[Rita L. Sev]

A visionary neanderthal... Lol! You actually had me for a moment, thinking this was to be a romantic poem... which, in a way I guess, it is... ;) Funny one, Mark!

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you rita.

[Jack...]

Tanka at its finest. Letting the true beauty show through.

[Baby Ricochet]

It's high art

[Baby Ricochet]

I had to delete the first comment over a typo.

[Lydia Shutter]

Giggling here....a cute bawdy limerick. Lydi**

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Lydi

[KAOlmsted]

HA! xD Well, the syllable count is right ;-) You are the Babiest Ricochetiest Baby Ricochet of them all xD xD xD Love it, Mark.

[Baby Ricochet]

LMAO!! Thank you baby

[KAOlmsted]

;-) my absolute pleasure...

[Frieda P]

Ha leave it to you, is this a continuing theme? ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I'd never heard of a Tanka until they started popping up for some contest so I made this one up in about a minute. As long as you keep writing you won't get hit with writers block.

[Frieda P]

That's not what I was talking about.....nice one Baby!

[Baby Ricochet]

I know. Thank you

[Frieda P]

I was wondering.... ;-)