Dream Girl Tanka

I know they're not suppose to rhyme. I'm a visionary

       Dream without a care
       Of a lass of virtue fair
        With all of that said
    I'll take a stripper instead
So long as she's bare down there

Author's Note

I know. I'm an objectifying neanderthal. But I own it.

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

A note on your note
Lol my friend brittany and I were talking the other day and I was on another of my hormonal boy rants and she just looks at me and says, "At least you KNOW you're boy crazy"
sorry, just kinda reminded me about that

Anywho this piece started out not at all like a Ricochet, but you snuck in there at the end, bravo

[Baby Ricochet]

It's true. At least you do know. Thank you Annabelle

[Tom]

I admire your style (& your courage !)

Quality again !

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you tom

[Tom]

You're welcome, forgot to mention your honesty is also commendable, you show many great character traits indeed !

[Inda]

Nice one! Made me laugh. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you inda

[Mark]

Yep, you do own it. In style! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you mark

[Eddie Phillips]

HAHAHAHAA! Man this poem is a setup! You start out with a sweet whimsical line of wonder and then hit us with the truth! LOL I cracked up.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you Eddie

[s y e]

That's a funny write, BR - made me smile.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you noodle

[Keith]

Lol, thats funny..........

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keith

[Gaurav Walia]

Jocular it is. Made me smile... :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you gaurav

[Coyote Poetry]

I did like those strippers in my 15 years in the military. Good conversation and could make me laugh. I like the logic of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Coyote

[Shivam Murari]

Oh oh! Nice a humorous. I think it should be rated mature, don't you think?

[Baby Ricochet]

Naa. Thank you

[Shivam Murari]

hahahaa :)