SlaughterHouse Dreams
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
It's a poem. With rhymes and s**t.
Got a job in a slaughterhouse on top of grinding gears Strapping pigs to electric chairs for bovine profiteers Wrap hooves with conductor wire Then throw the killing switch I work for piss and vinegar Make profits for the rich Exploit the lands of Africa Cow them with the lash Our founding fathers ambitions A slave holder's panache Running guns across the desert Rape the land for spoils Waging war for profit margins The price of diamond oil Exploiting fears of terrorism So hate can germinate Turn the land of milk and honey Into a fascist state Ride the backs of common people Until we're broken down Profiteers eat all our children while we all slowly drowned Working in this slaughterhouse listening to the screams Watching entrails on the walls turn into payday dreams Stick electrodes into piggy one last screaming squeal Hit the switch electric twitch then hang it on the wheel
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
Yes I know bovine is cattle.
Reviews
I think you nailed it, the evil side of humankind that is our defining characteristic. No amount of moral and religious platitudes will stop humans from being unkind and uncivil to other humans.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by Kenneth. I appreciate it
10 Years Ago
Not a problem. I will read more tonight.
Aren't you a clever one? I got this one. "Exploiting fears of terrorism So hate can germinate Turn the land of milk and honey Into a fascist state". You are no dummy nor do you turn a blind eye or stick you head in the sand. It's good to see that you are with eyes wide open. I have heard the war stories from V.N. and have cried with the men in hospitals. Yea, take the innocent into slavery and then steal the rest. Welcome to the real world, huh?
Posted 10 Years Ago
Aren't you a clever one? I got this one. "Exploiting fears of terrorism So hate can germinate Turn the land of milk and honey Into a fascist state". You are no dummy nor do you turn a blind eye or stick you head in the sand. It's good to see that you are with eyes wide open. I have heard the war stories from V.N. and have cried with the men in hospitals. Yea, take the innocent into slavery and then steal the rest. Welcome to the real world, huh?
10 Years Ago
For sure. Thanks for stopping by Sue
I do love a good horror story. This was well written and flowed seamlessly. Great tone and description worked well together.
Nice
Posted 10 Years Ago
I do love a good horror story. This was well written and flowed seamlessly. Great tone and description worked well together.
Nice
10 Years Ago
Thank you Troy
This is um disturbing to say the least.But i am guessing that was exactly your goal.So bravo:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is um disturbing to say the least.But i am guessing that was exactly your goal.So bravo:)
10 Years Ago
thank you vidya
10 Years Ago
You are welcome:)
My oh my if I didn't feel ill before,I do now!
I can feel how disturbed you are by this, and your emotion comes through in your writing.
I think you did a good job, with your style and creeping me out!
Posted 10 Years Ago
My oh my if I didn't feel ill before,I do now!
I can feel how disturbed you are by this, and your emotion comes through in your writing.
I think you did a good job, with your style and creeping me out!
10 Years Ago
Thank you Kaylie
Disturbing, yet well written, I'm happy to be a vegetarian after reading this one.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Disturbing, yet well written, I'm happy to be a vegetarian after reading this one.
10 Years Ago
lol! Thank you R&B
I think I got most of the symbolism, but having once worked in a non-metaphorical slaughterhouse didn't help much.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I think I got most of the symbolism, but having once worked in a non-metaphorical slaughterhouse didn't help much.
10 Years Ago
LOL! That puts a different spin on things
Actually, this is serious. Both in content and in the construction of the poem. You seem to be troubled by all this, and this is because it relates to the world as a whole. This is about life. Hmmm. It is a good poem, and you should be proud of it. It is not s**t, at all it is good stuff.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Actually, this is serious. Both in content and in the construction of the poem. You seem to be troubled by all this, and this is because it relates to the world as a whole. This is about life. Hmmm. It is a good poem, and you should be proud of it. It is not shit, at all it is good stuff.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by Daffy. I appreciate it
10 Years Ago
How about tomorrow?
this poem must be the "third" white meat...
the slaughterhouse...the cruelty...i do eat beef and pork...but am not happy with the way we secure the meats from the animals..
cruelty just because they are not human?
i love animals...we need better ways to get our food...and better ways to experiment, not on animals...
really good poem...almost with a touch of black humor...but so relevant to how we humans treat the very animals that sustain us.
Posted 10 Years Ago
this poem must be the "third" white meat...
the slaughterhouse...the cruelty...i do eat beef and pork...but am not happy with the way we secure the meats from the animals..
cruelty just because they are not human?
i love animals...we need better ways to get our food...and better ways to experiment, not on animals...
really good poem...almost with a touch of black humor...but so relevant to how we humans treat the very animals that sustain us.
10 Years Ago
Interesting insight. Thank you Jacob,
Let the masterpiece live for eternity.
Let the scholars of politics,business,literature and diplomacy
find inspiration to learn and interpret their roles and responsibility.
Let the heads of states enjoy this bittersweet poem on humanity.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Let the masterpiece live for eternity.
Let the scholars of politics,business,literature and diplomacy
find inspiration to learn and interpret their roles and responsibility.
Let the heads of states enjoy this bittersweet poem on humanity.
10 Years Ago
Amen Brother. Thanks for stopping by
10 Years Ago
Amen.I feel very blessed to find this epic piece.
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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