SlaughterHouse Dreams
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
It's a poem. With rhymes and s**t.
Got a job in a slaughterhouse on top of grinding gears Strapping pigs to electric chairs for bovine profiteers Wrap hooves with conductor wire Then throw the killing switch I work for piss and vinegar Make profits for the rich Exploit the lands of Africa Cow them with the lash Our founding fathers ambitions A slave holder's panache Running guns across the desert Rape the land for spoils Waging war for profit margins The price of diamond oil Exploiting fears of terrorism So hate can germinate Turn the land of milk and honey Into a fascist state Ride the backs of common people Until we're broken down Profiteers eat all our children while we all slowly drowned Working in this slaughterhouse listening to the screams Watching entrails on the walls turn into payday dreams Stick electrodes into piggy one last screaming squeal Hit the switch electric twitch then hang it on the wheel
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
Yes I know bovine is cattle.
Reviews
Ride the backs of common people
Until we're broken down
Profiteers eat all our children
while we all slowly drowned
This whole piece is really deep and true.... great job !!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Debbie
I still like bacon after this piece....
Posted 10 Years Ago
I still like bacon after this piece....
10 Years Ago
Bacon is awesome
I'm disgusted. Wanted to run away after just the first stanza. It's like a horror film. Even the photo is gruesome. But I read the whole damn thing. Nice job on providing me with nightmares. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
I'm disgusted. Wanted to run away after just the first stanza. It's like a horror film. Even the photo is gruesome. But I read the whole damn thing. Nice job on providing me with nightmares. :)
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by
I gotta start catching up on your work. I like the way you write man, you always speak your mind and you write about things no one else does and thats what I try to do. I give it a 15 out of 10
Posted 10 Years Ago
I gotta start catching up on your work. I like the way you write man, you always speak your mind and you write about things no one else does and thats what I try to do. I give it a 15 out of 10
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by Justin. I appreciate it
10 Years Ago
Not a problem. Keep writing!
the ham, the loin , the shoulder
the whole thing
squealing into the grinder
Obedient unquestioning freedom
it is not the work it is what we bring to it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
the ham, the loin , the shoulder
the whole thing
squealing into the grinder
Obedient unquestioning freedom
it is not the work it is what we bring to it.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by
omg that is so harsh..how can anyone do it ?
well that is written well..and good write
Posted 10 Years Ago
omg that is so harsh..how can anyone do it ?
well that is written well..and good write
10 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by
10 Years Ago
my pleasure :)
10 Years Ago
my pleasure :)
Well, that's why I became a vegan :) You have a clear and honest writing style. I love it. Thanks for writing that.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Well, that's why I became a vegan :) You have a clear and honest writing style. I love it. Thanks for writing that.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Henry
Really touching, good and disgusting just the way this business is. I love your stark descriptive style.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Really touching, good and disgusting just the way this business is. I love your stark descriptive style.
11 Years Ago
thanks for stopping by curiocity. I appreciate it.
Wow, this is intense and powerful (both politically and emotionally)! Somehow (and this is not a complaint), it reminds me of Nine Inch Nails' lyrics from The Downward Spiral era (perhaps all the "piggy" imagery).
And I can relate to the message of feeling as though you're at the bottom of the barrel, doing all the hard work while the people at the top profit and exploit the workers - I've had a number of very physical jobs, where I was doing that kind of work, and you elicit those memories very well.
I'm assuming this is based on personal experience? Excellent write!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow, this is intense and powerful (both politically and emotionally)! Somehow (and this is not a complaint), it reminds me of Nine Inch Nails' lyrics from The Downward Spiral era (perhaps all the "piggy" imagery).
And I can relate to the message of feeling as though you're at the bottom of the barrel, doing all the hard work while the people at the top profit and exploit the workers - I've had a number of very physical jobs, where I was doing that kind of work, and you elicit those memories very well.
I'm assuming this is based on personal experience? Excellent write!!
11 Years Ago
Yes it is. Thank you Eric
11 Years Ago
You're welcome, dude!
Really dark and deep. Nice job ^-^
Posted 11 Years Ago
Really dark and deep. Nice job ^-^
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your input
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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