What a contrast you have going here... the short, rhyming verses that keep this playful rhythm make it feel lighthearted, but the raw, powerful words bite and sting as they creep into the psyche... I have to say the effect is quite profound.. The images are disturbing and add to the seriousness of your message brilliantly. The lines that really "hit" me was where you described the exploiting of fear so that hate can grow... That is so sad but very true... some of your word choices here are so spot-on and pack a hard emotional punch. all I can say is, wow..
Great rhymes, funny but thought provoking content, and a really great pace.
I could hear the attitude in your voice (the voice I've assigned you in my head).
Ah B.R. I love your selection of themes for your work. there's no limit to what you won't tackle with words. This is no exception except that it is exceptional. Thanks for this one.
I never reviewed this and I don't know why. Your skills with a pen are evident and on fire in this one. You always write the truth no matter what the subject and this is no different. Your rhythm is meter perfect. (I'm a drummer 45 years, I should know. ha) Always interesting words from you Ric. Great job.
Porcine - poor creatures to be eternally associated with the greedy.
Turn your head away and lust for even the tiniest mite of the needy.
Every little cent to scalp, squeeze them out till their blood runs dry.
Feign and fake, manipulate, spread tales till panic runs sky-high.
For in the end, all you are asking for now makes sense
Drain them off to their very last hard-won cent.
I write just for the hell of it
A way to spend some time
Blurting out in cyber space
Whatever's on my mind
Maybe funny maybe tragic
Emotional and raw
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