SlaughterHouse Dreams
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
It's a poem. With rhymes and s**t.
Got a job in a slaughterhouse on top of grinding gears Strapping pigs to electric chairs for bovine profiteers Wrap hooves with conductor wire Then throw the killing switch I work for piss and vinegar Make profits for the rich Exploit the lands of Africa Cow them with the lash Our founding fathers ambitions A slave holder's panache Running guns across the desert Rape the land for spoils Waging war for profit margins The price of diamond oil Exploiting fears of terrorism So hate can germinate Turn the land of milk and honey Into a fascist state Ride the backs of common people Until we're broken down Profiteers eat all our children while we all slowly drowned Working in this slaughterhouse listening to the screams Watching entrails on the walls turn into payday dreams Stick electrodes into piggy one last screaming squeal Hit the switch electric twitch then hang it on the wheel
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
Yes I know bovine is cattle.
Reviews
Love this , poignant thought provoking and to the point, satire in rhyme.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Moon
This is fantastic, one of my favorite pieces from you, really shows your skill as a writer/poet.
Reminds me that you are a lot smarter than you allow us to think. There is more to you than just b**b jokes and alcohol and that's why we keep reading. Great piece!
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is fantastic, one of my favorite pieces from you, really shows your skill as a writer/poet.
Reminds me that you are a lot smarter than you allow us to think. There is more to you than just boob jokes and alcohol and that's why we keep reading. Great piece!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Inda
The picture alone would inspire me to write. However I don't know that I would have done it as much justice as what you just did. I know you may consider yourself humble, but you still have my respect. I see a creative brilliance in your harsh, blunt ways.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The picture alone would inspire me to write. However I don't know that I would have done it as much justice as what you just did. I know you may consider yourself humble, but you still have my respect. I see a creative brilliance in your harsh, blunt ways.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Muse
It's a review, with praise and s**t
I swear, Baby Ricochet had developed a form of satire all his own. A very good one. Always packs a punch and the criticism is hidden, like normal, under a very thick layer of sarcasm. A pleasure, as always
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's a review, with praise and shit
I swear, Baby Ricochet had developed a form of satire all his own. A very good one. Always packs a punch and the criticism is hidden, like normal, under a very thick layer of sarcasm. A pleasure, as always
11 Years Ago
Thank you Annabelle
Rhyme, rhythm - and a powerful analogy. This is the American machine, keeping every animal in their proper place... Excellent poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Rhyme, rhythm - and a powerful analogy. This is the American machine, keeping every animal in their proper place... Excellent poem.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Rita
It's always been like that, and it always will be.
Posted 11 Years Ago
It's always been like that, and it always will be.
11 Years Ago
That's for sure
Crazy bloody! I like how you start and end in the slaughter house.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Crazy bloody! I like how you start and end in the slaughter house.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Mark
HA! You write some crazy stuff bro! I love it though. It is creative and always just a bit funny. Creativity is in your blood
Posted 11 Years Ago
HA! You write some crazy stuff bro! I love it though. It is creative and always just a bit funny. Creativity is in your blood
11 Years Ago
Thank you Eddie. It's good to see you
I like it. In my eyes, a commentary on how everything becomes about gain at any costs, whether it be human lives or money. As long as the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Good poem with great rhyme and meter. Nicely done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like it. In my eyes, a commentary on how everything becomes about gain at any costs, whether it be human lives or money. As long as the rich get richer and the poor get poorer. Good poem with great rhyme and meter. Nicely done.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Will
Interesting poem and the rhymes were good awesome job :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Interesting poem and the rhymes were good awesome job :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you Ankara
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Baby Ricochet Tampa, FL
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