First, this is Rhea752, had to get a different account
Secondly, ow. My brain has been scarred. The imagery was vivid and the message couldn't be any clearer. I absolutely love this poem. Keep up the great writing :)
Im sorry I didnt get to this earlier BR. Its a brilliant commentary on the way the world is and how its is going to stay the way it is unless people wake up - thankfully we have poets like you to wake us from our stupor
for all your smartassery - you usually have a much deeper - serious edge to your work - as it is with this one. You make a strong point about the human condition. And then you punch the reader in the nuggets just to make sure we got it. Bravo!
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Thank you TL
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smartassery .....? How did you sneak that one past spell checker TL ...lol
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There are electric chairs for pigs ? Why would they do that ? Pigs are basically very intelligent animals and don't do us any harm. Isn't it enough we make food out of them today without adding to that, torture ?
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I know. It's crazy
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Well, did you do this yourself personally ? Didn't you ask them why it was being done ? :/
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It's a metaphor.
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Ohh ... Man, I was literally reading into this - wracking my brain trying to figure out why people w.. read moreOhh ... Man, I was literally reading into this - wracking my brain trying to figure out why people wanted to electrocute pigs ? So - you are saying then you worked for the police where they used the electric chair for convicts ?
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Yes
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OMan, how could you even do that ? Wow ... OK, that's too much for me ! I know there are criminals a.. read moreOMan, how could you even do that ? Wow ... OK, that's too much for me ! I know there are criminals and they're bad people and all but even I certainly couldn't pull the switch for stuff like that. :o
Insurance ? You mean death insurance right ? Their relatives would receive - ok - I can't talk about.. read moreInsurance ? You mean death insurance right ? Their relatives would receive - ok - I can't talk about this. That's just gruesome. :6
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Of course . I get free medical, dental and psych from the VA
I write just for the hell of it
A way to spend some time
Blurting out in cyber space
Whatever's on my mind
Maybe funny maybe tragic
Emotional and raw
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