Home Alone Senryu

Hey, it's gotta be better than the last piece of s**t I wrote.

I'm so f*****g bored
Cause my girlfriend's not home yet
I'm in love with her

Author's Note

It's true

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

Short, direct, and can be read in many ways. I love shorter poems; they feel more honest than longer, more flowery ones. Nice work!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keith

[Tai Ryens]

Way to be blunt eh? Love that about your senryus

[Pryde Foltz]

AHHHHHHHHHHH. Lucky girl.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you pryde

[TL Boehm]

SMH! I"m so effing bored. Never read that line in a senryu before.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you TL