Home Alone Senryu

Hey, it's gotta be better than the last piece of s**t I wrote.

I'm so f*****g bored
Cause my girlfriend's not home yet
I'm in love with her

Author's Note

It's true

Reviews

[Keith]

Hope she knows..................

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh she does

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh she does

[Tate Morgan]

Oh you got it bad real bad. Kiss your butt goodbye Cause your a*s belongs to momma lol

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh for sure. Thank you Tate

[Tate Morgan]

yep There are way worse things in life. I for one am happy to be spoken for

[Mark]

It's good: statement followed by explanation followed by synthesis.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mark

[Marie]

You must have been really bored when you wrote this...I hope your girlfriend inspires you...

[Baby Ricochet]

She does. Thank you Marie

[Stella Armour]

well let's hope she will be home soon.....:o)

[Baby Ricochet]

She is now

[Stella Armour]

big hugs then..... :o)

[Rita L. Sev]

No hidden meaning here - sweet and to the point! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[ANTO]

Thats it - War Over !
lol
Its a great feeling though eh BR?

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ANTO

[s y e]

Awww, this is so sweet! You're love struck!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you noodle

[Nia Hope]

Aww that's cute lol awesome poem :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ankara

[Will]

Love it. Emotions of several different kinds represented here. You execute it brilliantly an wuicklym and it really works. Nicely done

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will