Lovers Dance

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
For you I'll dance so beautifully
in sacred lover's skin

Swirl you around like Aphrodite
with Aries in a maze
Achilles with a lover's fire
My heart and soul ablaze

The fates weave tales of lover's bliss
Pegasus breaths your name
Dance on the wings of fantasy
A satyr you can tame

Dancing on the breaking beaches
swirling through the sand
Moving you with Beelzebub
My guiding demon's hand

Dancing in the Pagan circle
around the phallus stone
Lust for flesh has deeper meaning
Than muscle blood and bone

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
Hear sweet music beckoning
Calling you from within

Reviews

[rhythm&blues]

Enticing read, not your standard fare, I really like this one.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you R and B

[Ruhoun Q. Geins]

May the gods aforementioned bless your sultry soul.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you so much

[QuietlyCrash]

Wow. I love the flow and rhythm. I could just feel this dance in every single line. Great job, BR. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Many thanks

[Corset]

well, I'll be a monkey's uncle, sultry, sexy, romantic, devilish, it's all in there, amazing job (well ,not amazing for you! par for the course, but still... )

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol. Thank you corset

[Stella Armour]

the many ways in which we dance the dance of love, i really liked the pagan way.. wow!
loved the flow of your dance and the fantasy... great

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Stella

[s y e]

This is a great piece, the dance picks up the rhythm. Well written.

~ Noodle.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you noodle

[Cassie]

wow!!! I envisioned myself in this dance throughout the whole piece. Good one

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Cassie

[Keith]

Brilliant piece, the dance picks up pace and intensity & passion throughthe poem.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keith

[Jo Todd]

Nice poem, starts out quite light and innocent just a bit of dancing and flattery and moves into the realm or sin and lust. Very nice transition.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Jo

[Tate Morgan]

very well done sir. pagen and sin lol yeah i suppose we could see it that way. But nature takes it course and we have the most interesting mating rituals dont we

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes we do. Thank you Tate