Smart phone free verse babbling

I wrote this entirely with my phone's word select so in effect my phone wrote this piece

I am sad to see her go too far away
I will be glad to hear from the sunshine
Inside a sewer drain Listening for a few
I have been inside different types of people
I know you are looking for a short time
And the best way to get your hands on me
The only thing that I have to admit to being
Is a good time for the first one ever made
What are your favorite games and androgynous
Service Centers down the old Dixie highway
I am a beautiful person who tagged you in your browser
I've never been easier to use this way you could get it
I will be home by then and there is a great dedication

Reviews

[dw817]

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This is a memento for your cellphone as it gains momentum down the sewer line ? :) At least that's what I was reading from this.

One does wonder what happens to all those bricked cellphones. I had my Batman cellphone stolen years ago and since then I've been unable to get one through the mail.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ask Batman for a new one

[dw817]

You know - I really would like to, Rico. I think it would be total awesomeness if Batman really was around to fight crime and he stopped to come and visit me. Unfortunately there is no Bat Signal, and even if there were - with the state of the world today - who would answer it ?

But if he was around, I'm certain he would give me a new one - and that would be really neat - so thanks for thinking that ...

[Rita L. Sev]

Holy jalapenos - this is awesome! Clever, and it seems that your phone is quite insightful. Love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[Claire Barsett]

You did this with your phone? That is pretty awesome :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Claire

[poetdoug]

What will you think of next my friend? I love it! Thanks!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Doug

[Will]

Jesus Christ it sounds like Bob Dylan... But anyhow, it's a very intriguing piece. Somewhere, a poetry purist just s**t themselves. "A POEM WRITTEN ENTIRELY BY A DAMN SMART PHONE? WHAT HAVE WE COME TO?" I loved it. I think that you came up with a very ingenious way to write poetry, which tells more than you might think. The phrases your phone put together for you reflect what you've said in the past, so in turn, it is a reflection on you. If you read it 4 or 5 times like I did, it starts to make a sort of eerie sense, which I hypothesize might be different for every reader. Great work. Keep on inventing new poetic forms.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah. You got the gag. I post on the WC with my phone easily half of the time. I've written a lot of poems with it too so this piece is cut up BR freestyle poetry.

[Will]

I dig it. Good poem

[Angi]

'androgynous service centers down the old dixie highway' I don't know why, but I love these words! This is going to spark a trend, Baby. I just know it! Angi~

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome. Thank you Angi

[Mark]

Wow, you may have started a brand new genre... is this Android or iphone?

[Baby Ricochet]

iphone...........

[The Verse: A Poetry Jou..]

Well, your phone is one hell of a poet, It should be nominated for a Pulitzer.

[Baby Ricochet]

Maybe it should

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Touching an chaotic! just what we love

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas