My Last Breath Senryu

As I breathed my last
Before I faded away
I whispered her name

Reviews

[poetdoug]

Wow, color you Mr. Versatile. You seem to have no end to your poetic stretch. Love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Doug

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sad and beautiful...to think of your love for the last time....
Heartbreaking write, Baby! love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Robbie

[QuietlyCrash]

So hauntingly beautiful. I love how versatile you can be. Great job, Ricochet :)
-Riley

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Riley

[Claire Barsett]

Aw, this makes me think of every movie that has ever made me cry! Very good, short but powerful!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Claire

[Corset]

Baby that was a very sad and beautiful senryu, sometimes I do think you are a closet romantic.

[Baby Ricochet]

I am. Thank you Corset

[Corset]

i knew it :)

[quinfinn]

gorgeous. often you write some very highly controversial and provocative poetry. then you show up, occasionally... with something so profound, so beautiful , that it is hard to tell if it is really the same poet. you have a very gifted pen, dear ricochet. this is awesome!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for your kind words quinfinn. I'm genuinely flattered.

[quinfinn]

you keep me amazed and amused....

[Tai Ryens]

How romantic to breathe someone's name in the face of death; I do say, I enjoyed t his.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tai