Little Piggy Squeal

This isn't about anyone on the WC so get the conspiracy theories out of your head

You s**t eating little brown nose

You horrid little stooge

You miserable bottom feeder

You wretched little scrooge

 

Give up the names of family

In the old boys network

You're a s**t back alley yes man

With a snide little smirk

 

You treacherous little squealer

You no good tattle tail

You sang like a caged canary

Now I gotta make bail

 

I'll spring this joint by morning

and I'll be coming around

to act upon thy vengeance

your flesh I'll get my pound

 

I'll wait for you so patiently

and when it comes the time

I'll assault you like a pit bull

Revenge so sweet like wine

 

You thought I'd be an easy mark

A game I play like steel

I'll gut you like a slaughter house 

Fresh flesh to rip and peel

 

You'd thought I'd be an easy mark

and you were at the wheel

Thy bloody vengeance reckoning

Now little piggy squeal

Author's Note

I wanted it to sound all bad ass and shit, like an old school wise guy. I think it does. Of course I think so, I wrote the damn thing.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well one thing is certain, your a guiding light for those over patted men's retribution! good read.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas

[ANTO]

I couldn't get Deliverance out of my head so Im not going canoeing with you BR.
This is just what I was looking for - and this isn't a commentary on your piece - some light relief.
You delivered
Good man - good work - good night

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you ANTO

[Ashley N. Philyaw]

It sounds good. I've felt this way before and in my younger days I acted out and hurt a few people. Live and learn. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you haru

[unsavable_soul]

nice but eh, I know you got more in there Babes. Where's the heat?
I love most everything you do, but this one was a little under your potential in my opinion.
Nice write as a whole, just didn't feel it like most your works.
Chris
80/100

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you soul. I appreciate your input

[Shivam Murari]

This one was a bad a*s! No doubt! :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you shivam

[Keith]

Yeah, I give it A+ for bad a*s.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keith

[AYVID N]

Sounded a lot like a Mafia revenge story. It made a great fun read. What is great about your writes is :
1. The versatility and variety
2. Never a dull moment

Carry on writing Baby! :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you divya

[Will]

I'm thinking either some old money white guy or a cop pissed you off as I'm reading this. Awesome rhyme, great rhythm, and your execution is flawless. Good old fashioned Ricochet, and i like it. Nicely done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will. Kimmer said it made her think Irish mobster. Any interpretation that works for the reader is the right one.

[Will]

Irish mobster works too. But then again, it's a fine line between Irish cop and Irish mobster... Good piece any way you read it.

[Inda]

Classic Ricochet, loved it and it actually made me kind of squirm in some parts, so congrats on that :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you inda

[Annabelle Lee]

well dayum, must be about me.
jk

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you Annabelle