Six word story

Some solid advice

Use lots of astroglide baby.

Reviews

[Warrior]

Great story telling. This did justice in the realm of getting the message across. Great message. There's lot of times where a story can have a great message to aim for, and have a lot of under lining things but then no one gets it, and if no one gets it, then the point has failed. But in my opinion this did well to get the message across. You made it clear, which is why I think it's good. Keep up the good work. What was also great was that I could imagine the story as I read it, and that is also a strong point of stories. The ability to have the reader imagine it because after all we're reading not watching it, but it was as if I was there as I read this, and that is great. Great visuals and great story telling. It had plot and substance. When you add substance to writing it gets that much better. It gets the reader hooked on it and make them feel as if they are part of it. As long as their is that emotional connection between the reader and the story then it's good. The connection you were able to established in the writing gives the reader a sense of comfortably that they are in tune with the writing. So that way when the writing is over, the reader wants more, and wishes it didn't end. I feel the same way when I watched a movie or tv series that I get so attached to, I never want it to end. And for this writing, I didn't want it to end. You had me hooked, and I am sure everyone else who read it was hooked as well. That is good, that is what you want for people to keep wanting more. The way you put the story together makes me feel like my life is different for that moment in which I read your story. I love it, and it was beautiful. Just keep posting stories like this, and you'll have a good following.

[Rachel Anderson]

Oh, youuuu. Yet again getting the girls all hot and bothered. Haha

[Baby Ricochet]

I have my moments.

[Ohhhwillow]

OH! And those few words are enough to make any girl blush.. If said in th right tone, of course! Hot stuff, baby

[Baby Ricochet]

lol. Thank you Willow

[Jo Todd]

Tch cmon, really give me something to blush about. This is just common sense

[Baby Ricochet]

lol. Thanks for stopping by

[TL Boehm]

oh man. I just snorted. It wasn't very ladylike. And its all your fault.

[Baby Ricochet]

HA!..................

[rhythm&blues]

Sometimes I think your writing is intended just to make me/us blush.

[Baby Ricochet]

LOL! Maybe.....

[Seamstress]

*shakes head and smiles* Another interesting work of yours.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Seamstress

[Shivam Murari]

Where is the sixth word? :P

[Baby Ricochet]

I counted astroglide as two words

[Shivam Murari]

ooh right! :P

[unsavable_soul]

six out of five, not bad. This one alludes me, sorry.
Chris

[Baby Ricochet]

It's just me screwing around

[AYVID N]

:) sounds naughty, funny and cute.
Though I am not sure what exactly is the substance but the 'glide' in it kind of gives me strong clues :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Personal lubricant