LOVE; A Senryu

Love is like red ants

Crawling all over your a*s

Gotta shake it yo

Author's Note

The Capchya is surfbird "SURFIN BIRD! BA BA BA OOMA MAO MAO BA BA OO MAO MAO

Reviews

[Angi]

You're going to hurt someone with those brass balls bouncing around.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lol! Thank you angi

[dw817]

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Can't really say love is like red ants for me, big brother.

Love to me is, a tickle deep inside your soul, it's like the sand that trickles from your hand and is blown away to the wind. It's that remarkable rush of excitement you feel when you look up to the sky and see the sun and stars and the moon and wonder -

really wonder just how it is possible a person like you - or me - could have ever made it as far as we have without knowing the heart of someone else.

That, and the unique and beautiful kinship that follow in that favored fellowship - is ԼƠƔЄ - to me.

[Baby Ricochet]

Love is a lot of things. I love my girlfriend, I love my buddy koala, I love my mom (rip) i still love my x wife, I love my cat and I know what lyes in all of their hearts. It's not that hard to know. Love is pure lust, love is blind trust, love is dependant need, love is raw anger, love is saying "i could f*****g kill you right now but this will pass and I will still love you because if I didn't I wouldn't be so mad at you right now. My best site buddy is Kimmer and she and I have been in several cyber fights because we love each other. Sounds fucked up and it kind of is but love isn't stable. That's one of the reasons it makesus crazy

[dw817]

Love to you is passion, big brother, it sounds like something you would take control of and snap the reigns on to get where you are going.

Love to me is just a river, one I can float on my back without a care in the world and let it take me where it wants to, for I have no destination or even a thought of dedication in mind ... If it happens, it happens.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yeah. I've been told that before about passion so it must be true. No one can make you happier than the ones you love and no one can infuriate you more

[dw817]

Sometimes, Rico, you just have to go with the •*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸ FLOW •*´¨`*•.¸¸.•*´¨`*•.¸
Don't worry about where life is gonna take ya, just sit back relax, and let it happen - cause it will anyways. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Everything will flow.

[Marie]

When I first saw the title of this piece (LOVE;A Senryu) I knew you'd live down to my expectations.

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm pleased..........

[Tai Ryens]

You forgot to mention when they bite

[Baby Ricochet]

Not enough syllables

[Cassie]

hahahaha!!!! Very nicely poem that made me laugh.

[Baby Ricochet]

:).................

[Judas Hammer]

LOL funny stuff.....red ants hurt...love suxs!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you judas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Oh how you me giggle x I do adore you x

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas

[Annabelle Lee]

No idea what was goin on in your Note, but the senryu was good :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you annabelle

[Corset]

Laughing out loud, god that felt good, yo! lol

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you corset. Glad you liked

[Rita L. Sev]

Is that what that itch is? LOL! Fun senryu!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you rita