4th Of July Senryu
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
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The 4th of July
So I get to blow s**t up
F*****g awesome dog
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Author's Note
capchya miskill. Sounds suspiciously like "collateral damage." I'll go easy on the C4
Reviews
So many fireworks, so little time. You've captured the youthful and jovial side of this oh-so-American holiday. Nicely done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you will
HA! Yeah right?? Hope you had a great one...ours was surprisingly tame...and wet! Lots of rain :-( Oh well. Perfect Senryu, Mark.
Posted 11 Years Ago
HA! Yeah right?? Hope you had a great one...ours was surprisingly tame...and wet! Lots of rain :-( Oh well. Perfect Senryu, Mark.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Kimmer
11 Years Ago
Always my pleasure, Baby.
Big smile. Usually our 4th involves the neighbors shooting firearms but this year it was quiet. Not sure why.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Big smile. Usually our 4th involves the neighbors shooting firearms but this year it was quiet. Not sure why.
11 Years Ago
That's too bad. Fireworks are great
Isn't this what the young Dubya said as he was sticking firecrackers up frogs butts?
Posted 11 Years Ago
Isn't this what the young Dubya said as he was sticking firecrackers up frogs butts?
11 Years Ago
Had to be.........
Ya totally AWESOME my darling x
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ya totally AWESOME my darling x
11 Years Ago
As are you my friend
Frickin funny dude..the old one two... a damn funny senryu followed by wryly observed joke about the (sometimes frightningly relevant capcha)
You have a mischief surpassed only by your talent - as they used to say in Hill St Blues
"Lets be careful out there !" lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
Frickin funny dude..the old one two... a damn funny senryu followed by wryly observed joke about the (sometimes frightningly relevant capcha)
You have a mischief surpassed only by your talent - as they used to say in Hill St Blues
"Lets be careful out there !" lol
11 Years Ago
will do. Thank you ANTO
11 Years Ago
Get a room, boys...then invite me over xD xD xD
11 Years Ago
No rooms needed kimmer - we are outdoors kinda guys - eh BR .? lolol
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That's what its all about.
Posted 11 Years Ago
That's what its all about.
11 Years Ago
yes it is..........
LOL, That is a benefit of the day! Boom Boom Boom
Posted 11 Years Ago
LOL, That is a benefit of the day! Boom Boom Boom
11 Years Ago
That's for sure
Ha! Awesome, awesome! My men are geared up, too!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ha! Awesome, awesome! My men are geared up, too!
11 Years Ago
Naturally. Thank you Angi
Haha...this is funny. Only in America would a holiday be marked by the drinking of beer and blowing up of "s**t" as you put it! I love it...imagery wise, I can totally see this; I actually think I will be seeing this at about 8 this evening :) Well done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Haha...this is funny. Only in America would a holiday be marked by the drinking of beer and blowing up of "shit" as you put it! I love it...imagery wise, I can totally see this; I actually think I will be seeing this at about 8 this evening :) Well done.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Sarah
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