4th Of July Senryu

4th Of July Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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The 4th of July

So I get to blow s**t up

F*****g awesome dog

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
capchya miskill. Sounds suspiciously like "collateral damage." I'll go easy on the C4

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So many fireworks, so little time. You've captured the youthful and jovial side of this oh-so-American holiday. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you will
HA! Yeah right?? Hope you had a great one...ours was surprisingly tame...and wet! Lots of rain :-( Oh well. Perfect Senryu, Mark.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmer
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Always my pleasure, Baby.
Big smile. Usually our 4th involves the neighbors shooting firearms but this year it was quiet. Not sure why.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's too bad. Fireworks are great
Isn't this what the young Dubya said as he was sticking firecrackers up frogs butts?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Had to be.........
Ya totally AWESOME my darling x

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

As are you my friend
Frickin funny dude..the old one two... a damn funny senryu followed by wryly observed joke about the (sometimes frightningly relevant capcha)
You have a mischief surpassed only by your talent - as they used to say in Hill St Blues
"Lets be careful out there !" lol


Posted 11 Years Ago


KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

Get a room, boys...then invite me over xD xD xD
ANTO

11 Years Ago

No rooms needed kimmer - we are outdoors kinda guys - eh BR .? lolol
X
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

xD Nice...
That's what its all about.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

yes it is..........
LOL, That is a benefit of the day! Boom Boom Boom

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
Ha! Awesome, awesome! My men are geared up, too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Naturally. Thank you Angi
Haha...this is funny. Only in America would a holiday be marked by the drinking of beer and blowing up of "s**t" as you put it! I love it...imagery wise, I can totally see this; I actually think I will be seeing this at about 8 this evening :) Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Sarah

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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