Traffic jam Senryu

Trapped in the traffic
Of a high way accident
Time crawls like dead snakes

Reviews

[KeelyJane]

interesting comparison and surprisingly after much thought, very true. Thanks for sharing.

[Seamstress]

So very true and another entertaining write here.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you seamstress

[KAOlmsted]

Traffic is a b***h.
This melodrama is, too...
Dead snakes cannot crawl

;-) xoxo

[Baby Ricochet]

That's true.....

[KAOlmsted]

;-) xoxoxoxo (is that 10 characters??)

[Zahra]

Cleverly described. Interesting senryu, very nice.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you voice

[Jo Todd]

try being stuck in that traffic jam and needing a piss, then see how long it seems to take

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you jo

[Eddie Phillips]

LOL It is truly relative.

[Baby Ricochet]

that's for sure

[Baby Ricochet]

Einstein said time is relative. All you have to do is think about time during a traffic jam and time during great sex to know what he meant. I'm going to perform an experiment by having sex during a traffic jam and see what happens to time. What if time reverses and I get younger? That would be awesome

[Will]

Einstein explained relativity by saying that, and I'm paraphrasing to he best of my memory, "Putting your hand on a burning stove for a minute feels like an hour, while talking to a pretty girl for an hour feels like a minute. That's relativity."

[icelandicblue]

It most certainly does. I've been in traffic so bad people were getting out of their cars to stretch their legs. Love that last line, it's a classic.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you blue

[Sam Sin Sepultura]

"Time crawls like dead snakes". Awesome

[Baby Ricochet]

It does in a traffic jam

[AYVID N]

Conveys the feeling...effortlessly and beautifully! Made the right impact. Thanks Baby!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you divya