The is so you. A strong, thoughtful head behind a funny front. It really is signature you, and the imagine of a bad a*s grandpa rollin' around the street in a pimped out wheelchair.. That's just golden haha! Time may go faster that we would like, however it can still be on our side. Though I'm not even 18 yet, I can say there's no way in hell I'll be sitting leisurely sewing in a retirement home when I'm elderly! Great job here Baby, just great!
I can feel the angst and the agony Ricochet no doubt. However, I think you didn't revise the poem before uploading it. A few small mistakes have crept in.
Like,
'Go to work and be to tired'
may be "Go to work and be too tired" ?
'Blowing all mt pension money'
may be "my pension money"
These are just a few hastened mistakes,do not alter the gist of the poem, which comes across very well. Thanks for sharing :)
I write just for the hell of it
A way to spend some time
Blurting out in cyber space
Whatever's on my mind
Maybe funny maybe tragic
Emotional and raw
Politi.. more..