Retirement Blues

Retirement Blues

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Reflections on a Retirement I'll never see

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Someday I'm supposed to retire
But I won't live that long
Go to work and be to tired
To the grave I will belong

Retirement's a game of chance
for my generation
This ain't no place for golden years
Youth domination nation

I can roam the streets with an M16
Sticking up young punks
Gimme your money ya little s**t
Before your head's in chunks

Be bad a*s in a pimped wheelchair
Riding around real tough
Hit on hot b*****s at the home
Girl I'm still man enough

Shooting Viagra in my veins
Snorting vitamins crushed
Blowing all mt pension money
on hookers and some rush

So now you know why I won't live
to see retirement
It doesn't matter anyway
Now go fetch my ointment

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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This reminds me a bit of the song "My Generation" by The WHO - the line goes "I hope I die before I get old!" and also of a graphic novel BR. Bet you enjoyed writing this.
Sticking up punks with an M16 - class!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

My Generation's a classic. Thank you ANTO
You've got me grinning with this one, Mark. I love the rhyme scheme, and I can actually see you as an old man doing everything you describe. Gave me a laugh, good piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Will. I'm glad you liked it.
Funny and unfortunately true tale, good luck with those hot b*****s by the way, and do you still actually have an M16?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm picturing Marie now with an M16...ha
Marie

11 Years Ago

We have a lot of people in Texas who need shooting (Jack probably doesn't know any), and an automati.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Not sure you want efficiency for those types Marie....
i am retired. it is over-rated...get it while you can, cause once you slow down it gets mighty boring. nice write, Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I'll do my best. Thank you guinfinn
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

always welcome troop! carry on..... and, as you were....
I hope you don't riddle your golden years with blood and bullets.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I'll try not to. Thank you Marie
BR are you planning your retirement hmm. Good and funny as you make it sensible as always :)
Loved it :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you singh
Vikrantsingh

11 Years Ago

No problem, I'm happy you didn't change my gender like you did with Mark :P
heeheehee... starts out so serious, and the topic is so true.. but then starting at this stanza I started chuckling. Great write, loved it.

I can roam the streets with an M16
Sticking up young punks
Gimme your money ya little s**t
Before your head's in chunks

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you rita
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Excuse me, thank you mark. My bad
Mark

11 Years Ago

LOL no prob, I got it.
Retirement like our parents had is a thing of the past. That was once such a big aspect of the "American Dream", but you are so right when you say "This ain't no place for golden years, Youth domination nation..."
Another thoughtful tale, Mark.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you rita
Haha, I have long ways to go before retirement. I'll come back and visit this on days closer :p. Good read :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you Pollai
Great yarn, love the portrayal of a geriatric tough punk. Bloody funny!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

thank you Keith

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Tampa, FL



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