Storm Off The Gulf of Mexico Haiku
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
Summer Storms in Florida are impressive
Storms roll off the gulf Angry black clouds and waves break Poseidon's fury
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
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I believe there's an eternal whirlpool off the coast of Scotland.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
That must be where the Loch Ness monster comes from.
God this is beautiful!!! Posiedons furry!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
God this is beautiful!!! Posiedons furry!!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Aurora
Strong strong haiku and a terrifying picture.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Strong strong haiku and a terrifying picture.
11 Years Ago
Thank you TL
Oh my this is so true. This tropical storm is right off the coast of my town. Nice write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Oh my this is so true. This tropical storm is right off the coast of my town. Nice write.
11 Years Ago
Thank you QC
hmmmmmmmmmm good write it describes the picture above perfectly :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
hmmmmmmmmmm good write it describes the picture above perfectly :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you Peter
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Humm ! I love rainstorms. We get them so infrequently here. I wrote a program once to give me rain and draw the fractal clouds and flash the lightning and stuff when it was a horribly hot Summer. :)
You're encouraging me to post some music to go with this. That will be my next project in WC.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Humm ! I love rainstorms. We get them so infrequently here. I wrote a program once to give me rain and draw the fractal clouds and flash the lightning and stuff when it was a horribly hot Summer. :)
You're encouraging me to post some music to go with this. That will be my next project in WC.
Vivid, even without that very cool pic! Nice!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Vivid, even without that very cool pic! Nice!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Rita
weather to rock and roll in! NICE Pic!
Posted 11 Years Ago
weather to rock and roll in! NICE Pic!
11 Years Ago
Thank you Chris
11 Years Ago
I LOVED walking on the walls of the passageways! Chuckling here
Like how you include Poseidon. Made it seem more powerful to me. Great descriptors. Keep writing!!! :D
Posted 11 Years Ago
Like how you include Poseidon. Made it seem more powerful to me. Great descriptors. Keep writing!!! :D
11 Years Ago
Thank you Rhea
Better set condition zebra! I'd be doing an about face with that barge or tanker or whatever it is.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Better set condition zebra! I'd be doing an about face with that barge or tanker or whatever it is.
11 Years Ago
That's for sure.
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Added on June 7, 2013
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