Storm Off The Gulf of Mexico Haiku

Summer Storms in Florida are impressive

                 Storms roll off the gulf
        Angry black clouds and waves break
                        Poseidon's fury

Reviews

[s y e]

That is one pretty cool picture! :O I like it! Nicely penned Haiku.

~ Noodle.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Noodle

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well it seems you devil - that you hold a might trident!

[Baby Ricochet]

AH. Thank you Thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome my darling.

[Mark]

I like how you used the plural here, many storms. I can see them rolling in like an army, breaking one by one. Nice job.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mark

[Will]

Wow, hard hitting and impactful in such a tiny package. "Poseidon's fury" is such a brilliant line, and it really rolls with the tone of the piece. Great work!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will

[Marie]

Storms in Corpus Christi are impressive too...frequently turning into hurricanes. Fortunately I live far enough away to ecape this fury.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's a beautiful thing

[KAOlmsted]

O.O Is that headed to Pensacola??? xD My dad (who lives just south of Tampa) says the storms are very impressive down here...I know June 1st started hurricane season and we are not taking that s**t lightly. There is a chest freezer full of gallon jugs of water, a generator in the shed, and the tins in the pantry are adding up...we may not need it, but living in Alaska has taught us some pretty hard lessons, the least of which is the boy scout motto: Always be prepared! Thanks for sharing this, Baby, and be safe xoxo

[KAOlmsted]

I'm such a dork...I forgot to say this is one of the best Haikus I have ever read ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I'd imagine Alaska taught you lots of great survivor skills

[KAOlmsted]

Yeah, basically just stay drunk until it passes xD (sillykimmer) ;-)

[SyberRose]

Nicely penned Haiku...and a scary photo for sure...thanks for the presentation.:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Syber

[Sarah Khalil]

This captures that precise moment, the storm breaking in a concentrated moment of sound and fury, bursting. Thanks for sharing!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Sarah

[Marie Anzalone]

I've only ever been in tropical storms inland- never on the coast. On my bucket list, though, to see one. I can tell you that the North Atlantic up around MA and Maine plays for keeps, though. A very unforgiving ocean, with a long memeroy of those she has taken. Easy enough to imagine Poseidon having his residence there, and occasionally vacationing in sunnier, kinder locales in order to stir things up a bit.

Nicely done.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Marie

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow simply unbeatable :)
Loved it Mate :)

Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you singh

[Vikrantsingh]

Earlier this pic wasn't visible ;) i loved it .. will save it :)