Storm Off The Gulf of Mexico Haiku

Summer Storms in Florida are impressive

                 Storms roll off the gulf
        Angry black clouds and waves break
                        Poseidon's fury

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

really cool haiku, nice imagery.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rene

[ANTO]

This work is an education BR (Im discovering haiku and senryu).
Im left wondering if the storm is Poseidons fury or if the storm is pleasing to Poseidon and the amusement of it is enough to break the fury of the God of the sea. I love being left like that by films and music and books and now by your haiku. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome. Thank you ANTO

[D.E. Ball]

You used a beautiful picture that goes so well with the haiku. You've drawn the reader into the storm with only a few words. Nice work!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you DE

[Tate Morgan]

That looks bad dont think I want to sail into that .

[Baby Ricochet]

Uh uh

[annie lee]

Very good, very dark, very fierce. Staccato words like needle raindrops deliver the weight of Poseidon's fury profoundly. You painted the picture you posted with your words, but the picture would have been the result of your words regardless. When a little gem of 19 syllables can do that, it is indeed a great haiku.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you chinz

[Frieda P]

Last time I vacationed in Florida there was a wicked storm we watched from our balcony, exhilarating if you're safe from it's wrath, good one Mark.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Frieda

[Shivam Murari]

Nicely penned. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Shivan

[Kristin Lee]

Oh what I wouldn't give to be there to witness one. I know...I'm insane. But being a west coast girl I've endured storms and I can't help but love them for their awesome viciousness. Great words and great photo. I love your last line, it inspires such image!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Kristin

[Eddie Phillips]

Sweet!

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you Eddie

[Aristede Craig Jr]

hmm nice

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you.