LAPD Senryu

Quinfinn's Rodney King Senryu inspired me. Thanks bro.

We have to chase you
You're getting an a*s beating
So don't run a*****e

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

I love cops. Probably as much as I love you military boys ;-) This is really funny, but it truly depicts the attitude, I think. It's pure cop logic. Well done, Baby...gold star ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Kimmer

[KAOlmsted]

Always, Baby...

[Vikrantsingh]

Hahahahahahahahahahha that was hilarious ;)
Liked it
A*s kicking :P

[Baby Ricochet]

:)

[Rhea752]

Lol he seems so conceited. I like it!!! This is a funny poem Keep writing!!! :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Oh I will

[s y e]

Ha, this made me laugh. He seems fed up, mind you in a way so would I be but I get bored easily soooo, yeah. I liked it! :-)

~ Noodle.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Noodleeehead

[Sarah Khalil]

I love how fed up this all seems: We have to chase you, you're getting an a*s-beating, blah blah blah - all very rote, is it? Good for every police officer ever, methinks!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Sarah

[Tai Ryens]

You have a minor misdemeanor, in which you accidentally slipped in LA in LAPD. Please, correct yourself, it should be world.
Seriously speaking, it makes good television entertainment..

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tai

[dw817]

Uhh ... You wrote me to review this ?

First off, I ALWAYS do what police tell me to do cause I already know about that getting beaten and stuff part. When I was in the Ward they took Susan aways and I really hammered into the cop for her back but - you can't win - so don't try.

And most police dudes I know treat me really nice today so - maybe this is biased ?

That's my thoughts on this.

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks for reading

[dw817]

Err kay, you be good now. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Unfortunately in Philadelphia we have a record number of police officers dying in the line of duty... maybe they need to train in LA.

[Baby Ricochet]

Owing to my USMC background I sympathize with Law enforcement. Thank you for reading Rita

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Pure perfection and good advice

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas

[quinfinn]

make sure it is all caught on cell phones! i love this....reminds me of that new cop show, can't think of the name but awesome ...about the LAPD...damnit, i love it and can't remember the name.....great senryu!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you quinfinn