Emo Delemma

A man's got to know his limitations

   Luscious little emo princess
    love to slip you the bone
   But you're into androgyny
      and not Testosterone

   You reek of Anime sex toy
     You made up little tart
 If you want a man's attention
   That's a damn good start

    Emo princess not so Naive
  You know what hard men like
Seventeen dressed like a hooker
     Oh yeah girl that's right

The best thing I can do with you
      Leave you off the hook
Sweetheart I can tell you don't do
       the pro wrestler look

With muscle flexing everywhere
    What would I say or do
Come on the way I always play
    I'd just intimidate you

You and me not meant to be
     A body I'll never know
  I'll skip the cocky come ons
     and I'll just let you go
  

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! Emo Princess xD I love emo boys...they're so...soft and smooth ;-) Uh-oh...somebody unleashed the Cougar *laugh* The flow is great, the rhymes are great, the premise is great...what can I say...it's great.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Kimmer

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure. I liked it a lot.

[Frieda P]

I'll be honest, not one of my favorites, seems like you're playing to your audience here...you went off rhyme at the end too....

[Baby Ricochet]

yeah. I'll fix it

[Baby Ricochet]

There ya go. It's fixed

[Frieda P]

Looks the same to me, are 'know & alone' supposed to rhyme? What about I'll just let you go...

[Baby Ricochet]

No the changes didn't take in the computer so I re wrote the last stanza and re posted it.

[Frieda P]

Oh, I didn't see it even when I refreshed the page...that sounds better.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

I changed it again to your suggestion. Considering this is hardly one of my masterpieces I'm spending a lot of time screwing around with this poem. I think I'll stop now.

[Frieda P]

Lol good idea, even if it's not a masterpiece, they can't all be ya know, I still enjoy reading you... ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you

[Emerald Seas]

I don't even know how to comment. Glad he leaves her alone! Yikes

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you for reading Serah.