Emo Delemma

A man's got to know his limitations

   Luscious little emo princess
    love to slip you the bone
   But you're into androgyny
      and not Testosterone

   You reek of Anime sex toy
     You made up little tart
 If you want a man's attention
   That's a damn good start

    Emo princess not so Naive
  You know what hard men like
Seventeen dressed like a hooker
     Oh yeah girl that's right

The best thing I can do with you
      Leave you off the hook
Sweetheart I can tell you don't do
       the pro wrestler look

With muscle flexing everywhere
    What would I say or do
Come on the way I always play
    I'd just intimidate you

You and me not meant to be
     A body I'll never know
  I'll skip the cocky come ons
     and I'll just let you go
  

Reviews

[Eddie Phillips]

In my Clint Eastwood voice: A man has to know his limitations! I totally agree! LOL Good poem

[Baby Ricochet]

That's for sure. Thank you Eddie.

[Richard Man]

It takes a real man to realise his limitations.

[Baby Ricochet]

I think so

[Annabelle Lee]

Haha this reminds me of someone I know.....

[Baby Ricochet]

Me too.

[Tai Ryens]

Odd, I was expecting a witty rant about teens cutting for Bieber.

[Baby Ricochet]

Nah. When BR writes about a girl it's about lust

[Commanda Panda]

Absolutely whimsical, easy to understand and down to earth. Good use of vocabulary. I like the carefree, nonchalant tone this piece has.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Commanda Panda

[N!LoC]

eww with a vengence !

[Baby Ricochet]

HA! Thank you N!LoC

[Zelle]

it was amusing and well written!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Zelle

[The Daisy]

Very sarcastic, Baby Ricochet.

Teens are impressionable and they need, more than anything, compassion and understanding.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Day's Eye

[Will]

Nice one, Mark. Witty and sharp with good clear rhyming, and you successfully mix dry sarcasm with perfect depth and intelligence. Excellent as always.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Funny and fanatic really!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Thomas