The Last Poem

The Last Poem

A Poem by Baby Ricochet

This is the last poem I'll ever write
on my service to the corps
Sorry if you think I'm a total a*****e
But I can't do it anymore

I've got my reasons and rationals
No need to ask me why
It's just a decision I had to make
So kiss that part goodbye

I'm a US Marine Corps Veteran
and it's memorial day
A past I'm keeping to myself
So I got nothing to say

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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maybe it is best to go with your gut for now and do what is right for your well being and peace of mind. i support you regardless of what you write, but i think that you know this. you have many genres of writing and many different styles at your disposal, being a many faceted writer with a gift for the written word...therefore, i see much possibility in your future for different and possibly new and exciting venues. this is a great piece in itself, but i think you were going for a statement more than a clever poem. still, well done, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you quinfinn



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Your writes about your Service are so meaningful; of course, so are your other pieces. Just keep writing from your heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rita
The only person who really understands is the Self. When the time's right, the bell sounds then, silence absorbs all the pain until .. your favourite song fills the void. Your words are brave, sincere.. and, proof of who you are.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emma
I understand and respect that. You have been wearing your heart on your sleeve...and sometimes that's a dangerous and vulnerable place to be.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Yes it is. Thank you Cobra Lounge
You will be desperately missed by your fans, by your many-faced styles and the truth in your words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tai
it's written on your heart, those who love you and respect you will see it there

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emily
Emily B

11 Years Ago

we took some flowers to the local cemetery, to leave for the confederate soldiers that died August 2.. read more
No matter what you write brother I will read. I thank you for your service and sacrifice. Semper Fi!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Semper Fi
maybe it is best to go with your gut for now and do what is right for your well being and peace of mind. i support you regardless of what you write, but i think that you know this. you have many genres of writing and many different styles at your disposal, being a many faceted writer with a gift for the written word...therefore, i see much possibility in your future for different and possibly new and exciting venues. this is a great piece in itself, but i think you were going for a statement more than a clever poem. still, well done, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you quinfinn
Somethings brewing with the Baby, but won't ask way or what...will miss that part of you Mark, but you know what's best.

I think you meant 'rationale'

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Something like that, Thank you Frieda

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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I write just for the hell of it A way to spend some time Blurting out in cyber space Whatever's on my mind Maybe funny maybe tragic Emotional and raw Politi.. more..

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