Little Fawn

Seducing a much younger girl

    Young delicious beautiful girl
       Oh how you drive me wild
     Body blossomed into woman
          Face of a virgin child

With graceful girlie perfect curves
      and flawless glowing skin
You smell like girl and candy canes
    You make me dream of sin

   An animal sway is in your walk
         Just like a little fawn
Come sweet Doe eat from my hand
       Oh God you turn me on

   I'm old enough to be your daddy
        and girl you know I'm not
  You have so much to learn from me
     What boys your age know not

     Look behind thee oh little fawn
           A wolf is on your scent
       I have to feel it deep in you
             My K-9 soul's intent

       I'll sway you into anything
       I've got a demon's charm
    With a cocky can do come on
         You're easy to disarm

    Spinning you in a spider web
         I'm weaving in the air
     Win you like a carnival prize
       and lure you to my lair

 I'll come on like your lesbian lover
        Seductive sweet and pure
Tease you taste you gonna break you
         I'll be your sweet allure

Oh my little fawn don't you know
      The moon and stars align
Before this evening turns to dust
      You're gonna be all mine

Author's Note

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed "Little Fawn."

Reviews

[The Girl That Let You G..]

All about the chase..careful though, soemtimes the pray can become the hunter, and the hunter can become the hunted. ;)
(chuckles) Great write BR

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you girl

[Emily B]

my featured work attempts to show the 'hunt' from the other perspective ;)

[Baby Ricochet]

Ah I'll have to check it out

[Vikrantsingh]

Really way better, but pic is way better :P (Just Kidding)
Every single line makes sense to me read it twice slow and recollected every single meaning of it.
Genuine and better piece of art :)

Smiles!
Singh :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Vikrant

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome :)

[KeeD]

Haha you got your eyes set for the kill.. enjoy the hunt, well written bro

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Keegan

[quinfinn]

this is an excellent foray into the "thrill of the chase" as it were. i remember thinking this was both engaging and fun. now a days i find those young "bit's of fluff" comical and boring...i mean, really? show me something i haven't already seen a hundred times, no....... a million times! however, you do make the whole concept very entertaining with your honesty an your optimism. i used to have a friend years ago named Chuck who went up to every woman he saw and asked her straight up if she wanted to f**k. i saw him get slapped a million times. but, the nine out of ten who slapped him meant there was gonna be one out of ten who slept with him....he claimed the odds were good enough for him. awesome write, Mark.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ha! I never came straight out and asked though there were moments I probably could have. Thanks for stopping by quinfinn

[quinfinn]

always a lot of fun....

[Tina Kline]

This is very well written. You're creative writing skills show here!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Tina

[Annabelle Lee]

THis terrified me, but it was fantastic. Good write as usual, Baby R!

[Baby Ricochet]

It did huh. Well, thanks for reading dog. I do appreciate it.

[N!LoC]

oh really! when did u officially enter the realms of monogamy ? (interesting.... hmmmm)

[Baby Ricochet]

It's been awhile. Thanks for stopping by N!LoC

[Will]

Great work as always, Mark. I like the format here, and the rhymes flow very easily. This actually sounds rather Shakespearean in the way you phrase it, and I like it quite a bit. That feeling of "the hunt" is an exhilarating one, and you display it here well. I especially loved this stanza here:

" I'll sway you into anything
I've got a demon's charm
With a cocky can do come on
You're easy to disarm "

It characterizes the tone of the entire piece rather efficiently, and the way you say it really struck a chord with me. Awesome work again.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Will. You're to kind.