Praying she's eighteen Senryu

Praying she's eighteen Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet



Oh Pretty baby
Tell me you're over eighteen
It's so f*****g cruel

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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Hey watch it big boy, that's a pic of my kid there! Lol, kidding of course, you're a jerk Mark. Ha...clever Senryu and true many times, can't tell how old girls are these days, my son went to the prom with someone who I swore could be closer to my age...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Hee Hee. A day at the beach can be some kind of experience around these parts.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha yeah especially if you get locked up, watch your step ;-P
KeeD

11 Years Ago

I want to take you to the prom Frieda :) pick you up at 8? :)
clever senryu! love the photo. truth is, a young girl rarely knows s**t about how to please a man. pretty to look at, but sadly lacking in experience and prowess. give me a woman over forty, and i can rely on her life experiences to make her interesting and worthy of my time, and hers! well penned, my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Weiron

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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