Praying she's eighteen Senryu

Praying she's eighteen Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet



Oh Pretty baby
Tell me you're over eighteen
It's so f*****g cruel

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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crude , but its addressing the morality within society these days a picture tells a thousand words i like this so little said but so much thought went into it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Peter
Wow that chick is awesome ;)
Just kidding.. good sweet and small composition with hell yea... better pic :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Virkran
And what about the man in drag? Hey I feel lied to..give me my money back!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

HA!
Oh wow! I mean, no words! Parents these days are just letting their children slip too far!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Shivam
Shivam Murari

11 Years Ago

:)
Legality; no wonder people break the damn law. Well frustration in this situation is very understandable. A nice simple piece here to express yourself, and describe your situation wonderfully. Great work as always.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks Will
Oh jeez... BR, I have no words! Lol... Stay out of jail, please ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

LOL. I will.
Haha such a cruel world.. how f*****g cute is she though :D


Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
xD

That's it...just... xD

You rock, Baby...always and forever...

xD

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmer
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

;-)
Ouch! LOL Only the young can say they are free to fly away! Sweet child of mine! Sorry this picture took me to the 80s! I hope she is too! LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Ha! Thanks Eddie
Ah, youth - not that I ever could compete with that kind of beauty, even 20 years ago... I love the way you just look around and find a poem wherever you are!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rita

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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