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Praying she's eighteen Senryu

Praying she's eighteen Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet



Oh Pretty baby
Tell me you're over eighteen
It's so f*****g cruel

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


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*shakes my head and smiles*

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

;).......................
Haha! Did not expect this :P Clever poetry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Siren
Given the context of the picture,
nice write. I think it's something every straight guy goes through. Not to mention girls have come to look a lot more like women than they used to.
Chris
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you unsavable soul
unsavable_soul

11 Years Ago

No problem.
Chris
she's gonna tell you she's over eighteen. it'll still be cruel if she's not.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
You seriously can't tell any more. It's unnerving.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure
Don't go to prison now!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

I'll stay away
She said she was over 18, she was still in the eighth grade because she was stupid. Brains don't matter to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

HA! Good one!
this physically hurt me to look at that knowing if i was to give her the full length of the shlong, i'd do the full length of a sentence :(. funny write man.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thanks PhilGod. It's great to see you bro. You've been a stranger far to long.
So funny! And you're probably looking at jail time should you choose to step out from the confines of this senryu

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's for sure.
Naturally she's gong to tell you she's over eighteen. You're the one who has to decide.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

That's true.

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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