Memory clouds
A Poem by
Baby Ricochet
I'm coming to a crossroads in my real life
When I was youngin another life wore a uniform had a new wifeBig obligationsGrandiose plansA wife at my sidelife would expandThen we got orders We were deployed stressed to breaking marriage destroyedOff came the uniformpromptly divorcedGina had problems A matter of courseBulimic bi-polarGorgeous thin hippedcomplex and difficultsmart as a whipI wonder if Ginawould talk to me nowlook in my eyes or stare at the ground She would hate LexusSay she was dumbrolling her eyesshe would make fun Gina could be ugly and cruel say hurtful thingsmake you her tool That isn't LexusShe's a sweetheart A loving spiritplaying her part Hard not to love a woman like her It's all just to easyA thought that occursNothing was easyIn Gina's mad lifeOne day fantasticfollowed by strifeShe was incredibleWhen she was on top but you always knewthe other boot drop Lexus is more likea soft easy fitB eautiful woman Not one for s**tMemories of GinaFog up my brainWas she dramaticor truly insaneIt doesn't matterGina's long goneLexus is here Time to move on
© 2013 Baby Ricochet
Reviews
You seem happy my friend...that is a good thing, you deserve it. Very nice.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Jack
'Tis enticing how day to day nothing changed yet we look back a decade and everything has changed. You've done well expressing this thought through your own experiences; but is that not what poetry is? Very good with your poem; keep your pencil sharp and your mind sharper.
Posted 11 Years Ago
'Tis enticing how day to day nothing changed yet we look back a decade and everything has changed. You've done well expressing this thought through your own experiences; but is that not what poetry is? Very good with your poem; keep your pencil sharp and your mind sharper.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Tai. You too
Wow, its an amazing poem , the marriage between the context of the poem and the organization is wonderful, very good piece. Job well done
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow, its an amazing poem , the marriage between the context of the poem and the organization is wonderful, very good piece. Job well done
11 Years Ago
Thank you Acucena
11 Years Ago
You are welcome
Ricochet you and few of my friends are always my 1st choice. I keep peeping your work more often and love the chemistry between you and your thinking process :)
Keep up your work mate :)
Cheers!!
Singh :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Ricochet you and few of my friends are always my 1st choice. I keep peeping your work more often and love the chemistry between you and your thinking process :)
Keep up your work mate :)
Cheers!!
Singh :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you Vik
Men will be men for sure...
Waiting for Gina or Gina waiting for the loved one would be another dramatic scene or proof of insanity.
Move on as it ends.
Lexus is the new cup of tea or the seducing wine.
As I said Men will be men for sure..
Posted 11 Years Ago
Men will be men for sure...
Waiting for Gina or Gina waiting for the loved one would be another dramatic scene or proof of insanity.
Move on as it ends.
Lexus is the new cup of tea or the seducing wine.
As I said Men will be men for sure..
11 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by mary
Hold onto your good memories, and find strength from your bad experiences. You endured the worst Gina dealt, so now you're stronger and better prepared for your relationship with Lexus.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Hold onto your good memories, and find strength from your bad experiences. You endured the worst Gina dealt, so now you're stronger and better prepared for your relationship with Lexus.
11 Years Ago
Thank you D.E.
11 Years Ago
You're quite welcome! :)
Excellent Pen to the changing times...reflection has a good way of giving knowledge and some cases a sigh of relief ---a Look see in pen!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Excellent Pen to the changing times...reflection has a good way of giving knowledge and some cases a sigh of relief ---a Look see in pen!!!
11 Years Ago
Thank you soul
11 Years Ago
Anytime BR!!!
well, you know, it sounds very much to me like an upgrade took place. you went from the pricey but inefficient Ginamobile to a high end , comfortable, reliable and very well made Lexus. this is really great poetry , Mark, some of your best. i bet you get more miles from a fill up too!
Posted 11 Years Ago
well, you know, it sounds very much to me like an upgrade took place. you went from the pricey but inefficient Ginamobile to a high end , comfortable, reliable and very well made Lexus. this is really great poetry , Mark, some of your best. i bet you get more miles from a fill up too!
11 Years Ago
HA! That's funny. Thanks Pegasus.
11 Years Ago
always welcome, my friend
bittersweet chocolate ....
Posted 11 Years Ago
bittersweet chocolate ....
11 Years Ago
For sure. Thanks for stopping by N!LoC. It's always a joy to hear from you
A grafted piece that slates within the context of memory rather than time, well done, good read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
A grafted piece that slates within the context of memory rather than time, well done, good read.
11 Years Ago
Thank you Thomas
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