THE GREAT WC FLAME WAR

THE GREAT WC FLAME WAR

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Inspired by recent events

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The Great Flame war on the WC
Lines that shouldn't have crossed
A battle of words and expletives
When all our sanity was lost

There was a s**t storm brewing
In another poets bivouac
Slamming poet Tate Morgan
and hitting me with an attack

Sniping bickering and backbiting
Bitchy remarks were said
So I got myself liquored up
and fired a f*****g warhead

A new low below the belt
Even for me I think
Whenever I'm at my keyboard
I really just shouldn't drink

Feathers flying barns burning
People fanning flames
Pm's going every which way
The WC went insane

By the morning a mob had formed
looking to lynch a vet
My big mouth had struck again
Another faux pas  to regret

Tagging reviews all over my page
Ricochets a violent beast
The Authorities need to neuter him
and keep him on a leash

Misogynist criminal homophobe
Cyber bully Redneck
Wife beating rapist monstrosity
Inbred Cletus wreck

The nasty pm's came my way
The blocking had commenced
A hate campaign was in gear
from those I had incensed

I'm not playing the victim
It was a stupid thing I did
I came upon a hornets nest
and kicked the crap out of it

I got what I was asking for
So it's no big surprise
The only option I could play
Was eat some humble pie

When you screw up that badly
you have to apologize
You can act like a royal a*****e
and still be a standup guy

It was a really ugly thing I said
to someone who couldn't tell
My comments weren't serious
but scarier than hell

So your forgiveness I'll accept
with gratitude and grace
But don't forget this incident
and lets keep this a safe place

© 2013 Baby Ricochet


Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
Peace boys and girls

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We had to start a profile because you have blocked all of jkhatz's supporters. Your apology is nice but if only your friends can see it, what is the point? I read the review jkhatz left Tate Morgan. She critiqued it and offered advice. She did not blast him. Everyone knows when someone is critical of Tate Morgan he blocks you. This was one of her biggest complaints with this site. No real critiquing going on just people facebooking. She said you were a misogynist because you said women can not raise good men.
You responded with your horrible rant, confirming her charge.
You made light of it. Calling yourself a villain. After that you said it was alcohol.
I do think you understand the gravity of such words and I'm sure she would appreciate but she didn't block you. You blocked her.
More importantly, jkhatz was one of the better writers here. She cared about the work she added. We've lost someone who brightened up this place.
Your apology is good but if only for your supporters what is the point? There is no merit. If you had been a man and reached out to her and apologized I would have more respect for you. It's not your friends you owe it to. She's gone though. you missed your opportunity to be a real stand up guy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

THE FOLLOWING COMMENTS IS IN NO WAY EXCUSING OR JUSTIFYING MY COMMENTS TO JKHANZ. Jkhanz had posted .. read more
Friend of jkhtz

11 Years Ago

Thank you. She is open to communication. She did say she reached out to your friends.



Reviews

Like how raw and straight-up it is.

"A new low below the belt
Even for me I think
Whenever I'm at my keyboard
I really just shouldn't drink "

This was a good read, though I have to admit I don't have much knowledge of the recent WC flame war.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Consider yourself fortunate. Thank you for reading Pollari
Just keep remembering there are some sensitive souls here, mate. (I ain`t one of em)
Well written son. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Pete
one of the more entertaining apologies I've ever seen... I'm glad you found peace Ricochet :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lina
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

:)
It's not the first time this has happened, and it won't be m=the last. I was involved in one myself once, and certainly said some things I shouldn't have. Let's move on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Marie
1st - as a poem it works quite well, good flow and a direct message.

2nd - humble pie was well eaten and let's face it BR, muchly deserved, but let that be an end to it, we can't wallow, let's pick ourselves back up and do what we love, write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thomas I deserved to eat a bakery of humble pie for this. Thank you for stopping by and being my fri.. read more
We had to start a profile because you have blocked all of jkhatz's supporters. Your apology is nice but if only your friends can see it, what is the point? I read the review jkhatz left Tate Morgan. She critiqued it and offered advice. She did not blast him. Everyone knows when someone is critical of Tate Morgan he blocks you. This was one of her biggest complaints with this site. No real critiquing going on just people facebooking. She said you were a misogynist because you said women can not raise good men.
You responded with your horrible rant, confirming her charge.
You made light of it. Calling yourself a villain. After that you said it was alcohol.
I do think you understand the gravity of such words and I'm sure she would appreciate but she didn't block you. You blocked her.
More importantly, jkhatz was one of the better writers here. She cared about the work she added. We've lost someone who brightened up this place.
Your apology is good but if only for your supporters what is the point? There is no merit. If you had been a man and reached out to her and apologized I would have more respect for you. It's not your friends you owe it to. She's gone though. you missed your opportunity to be a real stand up guy.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

THE FOLLOWING COMMENTS IS IN NO WAY EXCUSING OR JUSTIFYING MY COMMENTS TO JKHANZ. Jkhanz had posted .. read more
Friend of jkhtz

11 Years Ago

Thank you. She is open to communication. She did say she reached out to your friends.
Ah... peace! I thought we were done with this subject? ;-)
An excellent, naked look at things packaged in this writing.
Moving on now? Let's...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

The only person I've not communicated to about this is jkhanz and she's the one who needs to see an .. read more
Emerald Seas

11 Years Ago

I understand that. I noticed she's been on a few times the past day or two even with her account clo.. read more
Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Not yet but I'm hoping too.
Oh I just love people to be happy!!!

Good one Baby Richohet.


Now let's all have a GROUP HUG!!


Yours in peace,

Helena ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Group hug with jkhanz.
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

jkhatz is a proud but intelligent person...we all have our "moments"...i imagine that she will make .. read more
Neuter is a bit drastic Mark, perhaps a temporary gag order. I had no idea what bivouac was, had to google, thanks, I learned something within in your words, and it had nothing to do with barracks. Good one Baby...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda
Peace, that's what everyone ever wanted. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

11 Years Ago

For sure. Peace

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