Heh?

Writer's block? Analysis? Paralysis?

Sitting here with my phone
I don't know what to write
My girlfriend she's sound asleep
She don't stay up all night

As for me I'm wide awake
Looking for a rhyme
Trying to write this piece of crap
In fifteen minutes time

Some of my rhymes they kinda suck
And others strike a chord
I'm trying to entertain you people
To keep you from getting bored

Okay so maybe once in a while
I got something relevant to say
I guess by now you figured out
That ain't gonna happen today

So I'll just waste your pressious time
With a useless throw away rhyme
Drift off to sleep and in the morning
The world will be just fine

Author's Note

Crap, again. Maybe I'm losing it

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Hey there's a poem here so i guess it wasnt a waste of time. Throw away's in the eye of the beholder. Writers block is a b***h...been there!! You'll be back to normal in no time...lol! ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Red

[Baby Ricochet]

And this is what I do love about your writing, making something truly gorgeous out of simple things, and surroundings. You entertain for sure BR! :) Nice word play!

- Elisa

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Elisa

[Inda]

Ooh this was so funny to me. Just the way the poem just went to the end on purpose and that's it. Love it!

[Baby Ricochet]

THank you sir

[AYVID N]

Made for a good read. Sometimes we just have to go with the flow and what comes out is good stuff. Like this piece. Thanks for sharing Baby.

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you divya

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Baby!

[Kaylor Mason]

nah, you ain't losing it . . . you're just feeling writer's block. A can of brasso does wonders for that--just be careful

[Baby Ricochet]

Brasso. Good idea. Thank you Kailor

[Tate Morgan]

with rhyme i can help if you needit

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Tate

[KAOlmsted]

This is f*****g brilliant. Nuf said.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Kimmer

[KAOlmsted]

Just saying ;-)

[Jack...]

Yawn..is it morning yet???

Nothing wrong with this piece at all, no sense losing any sleep over it. You sat, you wrote and your words were understood. Very cool sir.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you jack

[Rachel Anderson]

This voices a lot of stress with poets, writers, and artists. After reading the comments, I think they've got it wrong. I like this poem. I can feel your tiresome attitude, and I can see you rubbing your eyes in the dark, with the bright screen shining. It's not just about the words in the poem, which is what the others seem to be looking at. Anyway, I always enjoy your work, regardless of what the topic. Another job well done, in my humble opinion. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rachel

[Rachel Anderson]

You're welcome! :)